Planet Love Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBBCDCEFFGHIJKLLEEM MNONB| If loving me would have you crucified | A |
| I swear I'd carry your cross and mine too | B |
| All the suffering you'd imagine going through | B |
| I'd have them on my back and mine too | B |
| If loving you would make me ill | C |
| Trust me I'd be the most critical patient | D |
| I'd grief in pain for you and stay still | C |
| Go through all stages of death till my last office | E |
| Ever thought of a tea bag in a cup of hot water | F |
| How an analgesic drip would spread all over | F |
| That's what you do to my heart | G |
| Every time I miss you the meltings go on repeat | H |
| I swear and I'll still swear on God | I |
| If not your best I'll be your best or both | J |
| If not your last you'll forever be in my thoughts | K |
| Let me tell you something now | L |
| The many times I say I love you is because I can't explain how | L |
| Your presence is my weakness | E |
| That's the best way I'd explain this Sweetness | E |
| I just want to give it my whole | M |
| Give in everytime you poison my soul | M |
| Because under this sky I found love | N |
| I found home a place I always want to have | O |
| I found peace I found my Dove | N |
| And that beautiful soul is you | B |
Whizz Ixtrinsic
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Niloofar: Hello I read the poem and I think these lines when kind of unfitting and unnecessary (doesnt add anything to the poem and could be omitted or exchanged for better simile-metaphor:
How an analgesic drip would spread all over?
That's what you do to my heart,
Every time I miss you the meltings go on repeat
Awful..
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