If loving me would have you crucified,
I swear I'd carry your cross and mine too,
All the suffering you'd imagine going through,
I'd have them on my back and mine too,
If loving you would make me ill,
Trust me,I'd be the most critical patient,
I'd grief in pain for you and stay still,
Go through all stages of death till my last office,
Ever thought of a tea bag in a cup of hot water?
How an analgesic drip would spread all over?
That's what you do to my heart,
Every time I miss you the meltings go on repeat,
I swear and I'll still swear on God,
If not your best,I'll be your best or both,
If not your last, you'll forever be in my thoughts,
Let me tell you something now,
The many times I say I love you is because I can't explain how,
Your presence is my weakness,
That's the best way I'd explain this Sweetness,
I just want to give it my whole,
Give in everytime you poison my soul,
Because under this sky,I found love,
I found home,a place I always want to have,
I found peace,I found my Dove,
And that beautiful soul is you!
Planet Love
Whizz Ixtrinsic
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/20/2023
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Poem topics: I miss you, beautiful, death, god, grief, heart, home, pain, peace, sky, time, trust, water, forever, place, stay, dove, repeat, thought, poison, Print This Poem , Rhyme Scheme
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Niloofar: Hello I read the poem and I think these lines when kind of unfitting and unnecessary (doesnt add anything to the poem and could be omitted or exchanged for better simile-metaphor:
How an analgesic drip would spread all over?
That's what you do to my heart,
Every time I miss you the meltings go on repeat
Awful..
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