The Walk Up Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCC DDEE FGHH IIJJ| We decided today to checkout Paradise Falls | A |
| Hidden in The King Valley where we are camping of course | B |
| A minute round walk yeh that what the sign said | C |
| But whoever wrote that was definitely off his head | C |
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| A spectacular sight for your eyes to behold | D |
| Two cascading waterfalls from a height that's so bold | D |
| They say it's metres over conglomerate rock | E |
| But feeling dwarfed down the bottom it's surely a crock | E |
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| Now heading down to the base small step after step | F |
| Realising that after the fun you gotta head back up | G |
| With amazing views along the well kept track | H |
| I'm glad I said 'Shell let's give it a crack' | H |
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| So after we're done and the legs feel like jelly | I |
| We stop at Cheshunt for that pie in my belly | I |
| Overall I can say it was a top day all round | J |
| But next time I'd prefer to stay on a lot flatter ground | J |
Shane Smith
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Poet's note: Sightseeing the King Valley in Victoria, Australia
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