The Brown Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABC DDEE FGHH IIJJ| We pull up at Edi Cutting on a stinking hot day | A |
| At another free camp cause we choose not to pay | A |
| Only hrs here and decide to go for a swim | B |
| On this fresh water river known only as the King | C |
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| Then Shell says to me have a look over there | D |
| A dirty bloody Brown snake swimming across without a care | D |
| I jump out the water and grab my phone for a pic | E |
| So I took a short video of this foot Brown prick | E |
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| He then scurried off into the thick dense scrub | F |
| Hoping never too be seen again or She'll start shittin her duds | G |
| Now snakes n spiders seem to get her on edge | H |
| With a wide eyed glare even shaking I pledge | H |
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| Well what can I project about our first day at Edi | I |
| If I said let's pack up Shell would most certainly be ready | I |
| So needless to say when we think of that small Edi town | J |
| The first thing that we'll think of is that stinking bloody Brown | J |
Shane Smith
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Poet's note: Camping at Edi Cutting campground on the King River
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