Please Forgive Me Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEBFGHIJKLBMEEENO BPB EEQRB SESCETUVWE| If I would accidentally knock on your door | A |
| Would your eyes recognize me | B |
| Would your lips remember the stories they used to share when we kiss | C |
| Would your body remember the taste of my hands | D |
| Would you hug Me and kiss me the same way you used to | E |
| If I am to drunk to embark to my adobe | B |
| Would your house have a room for my soul | F |
| Would your kitchen have a meal for my flesh | G |
| Would your bathroom welcome with warm waters to cool off the booze in my mind | H |
| This break up had made me old | I |
| Driving winds to remind my self of how you used to smile | J |
| Begging my mind not to make you the focal point of my thinking | K |
| But how can a mind so small forget the rose that grew from its eyelids | L |
| When I close my eyes you are the one I see | B |
| Am even afraid to love again cause I will end up seeing you in them | M |
| You said I will forget about you | E |
| But what if time fails to do what it is suppose to do | E |
| How do you expect me to live without you | E |
| I can only exist without you but I can never live | N |
| I could smell the breath of your love through every wind I touch with my heart | O |
| Am even afraid of getting out from this shackles of misery | B |
| Am scared that I might come across you and you would see me drunk in a break up | P |
| And further confirm that I was just a useless boy friend who loved you deeply | B |
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| Truth be told I miss you I miss the feeling of loving you | E |
| I miss the thought of you walking into the heart of my room and suddenly my room smells like you | E |
| I've made many mistakes in my life | Q |
| Some I regret about it and some I've spilled the water | R |
| But this mistake of losing is one that digs my house of eternity | B |
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| I can't escape the feeling think about you everyday | S |
| I find my self writing paragraphs and deleting the meaning am afraid that you will remind me of how badly I treated you yet I die in every thought of how I mistreated you | E |
| I wish I could ask for forgiveness but I know that it would be just an underistament | S |
| I want you to know that I miss | C |
| And I hate my self for the way I treated you | E |
| I let stinking insecurities grew over my love | T |
| But my financial situation was the reason that gave birth to this insecurities | U |
| I wanted to do more for you but money didn't have any approval so I gave you my heart that also wasn't enough | V |
| Forgive me for trying so much | W |
| I only wrote to tell you that I love you and miss you | E |
Musa Mukelwa Simelane
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