I Hate Me Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCADEFGHIJKLEEE| Does it mean you won't express yourself | A |
| Why do you let your donts be your dos | B |
| You just can't say it's not what you want | C |
| I can't believe am injust to myself | A |
| When other tear me down I tear myself more | D |
| When people don't value me | E |
| I even don't even preserve my self esteem | F |
| Before others say am ulgy | G |
| From within me it originates | H |
| For success one believes in themselves | I |
| What do I do instead I just give up | J |
| I can't defend myself from anything bad | K |
| I do everything to please people | L |
| I end up loosing me | E |
| I hate me | E |
| I really hate me | E |
Miriam Onyancha
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Dragon-F: I understand this poem from my heart. “ When other tear me down, I tear myself more/ When people don't value me, /I even don't even preserve my self esteem/ Before others say am ulgy,/ From within me it originates.” This line of your poem is my favorite because even when people start to tear me down, I’m the one destroying my self. When they say I’m ugly or pig looking, I already know it from deep inside me because I’m the one it originated from all this self hate. Such injustice I do to my self. Anyway thanks for sharing your poem. It’s really Good…Amazing!!
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