Indeginous Saga Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEF GHI JK LMN OP QRS TUB LMVW B ENX EY ZA2B EEE MB2 TC2D2 E2F2E G2MH2NX

Some fishermen from the southA
bought milk from a certainB
Herdsman in the northC
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When some traders from the eastD
were buying and selling namesE
at the front and back of equityF
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That some farmers blood mixedG
their oilH
and it fuels their crudeI
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Silence engorge the golf of the westJ
They consulted the gods firstK
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Because the gods will not be blameL
should our messengerM
become a bandit to our messageN
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It's time we use our tongueO
to count our teethP
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That we may not continue to callQ
a spade a spadeR
only when we want to bury the truthS
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Least God will continue to hid good peopleT
of our midst till we appreciate themU
when you meet oneB
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Not to check his nameL
in wa registerM
Either wait for zo to finish his turnV
before you offer bia a seatW
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Is the Chibok narrative a nursery fictionB
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That is set in SambisaE
office from AbujaN
and home for DubaiX
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Possibly because Nigerian youths are lazyE
They were arrested by fearY
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The zeal for shortcutZ
shut their doorA2
and handover the key to decisionB
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For their choice of enmityE
against responsibilityE
made them guiltyE
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Our complains holds no waterM
If he's caught on the offside lineB2
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Like the fable of advance jungleT
where elections are conductedC2
but the lion remains the KingD2
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May be Shakespeare is wrongE2
that every bound man in his own handF2
lies the ability to cancel his captivityE
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I guess you've not heardG2
that they've killed the messengerM
And you're not awareH2
that the messageN
refuse to dieX

Gilbert Sordebabari

Poet's note: The poem "Indigenous Saga" by Gilbert Sordebabari is a powerful commentary on the state of Nigeria and the challenges it faces. Through the use of vivid imagery and strong language, the poet conveys a sense of frustration, injustice, and the need for change. The first stanza sets the tone of the poem by contrasting the simple lives of fishermen and herdsman with the complexity of traders buying and selling "names" and "equity." The poet seems to suggest that the pursuit of wealth and power has become a source of corruption and division in Nigerian society. The second stanza is particularly powerful, as it describes the mixing of farmers' blood and oil, symbolizing the exploitation of Nigeria's natural resources and the human cost of that exploitation. The reference to consulting the gods underscores the importance of tradition and spirituality in Nigerian culture, as well as the need for wisdom and guidance in the face of difficult decisions. The third stanza highlights the importance of truth-telling, even when it is uncomfortable or difficult. The poet urges readers not to bury the truth, but to speak out against injustice and appreciate good people when they encounter them. The fourth stanza tackles the issue of the Chibok girls' abduction and the broader issue of insecurity in Nigeria. The poet seems to suggest that the government's response to the crisis has been inadequate and that Nigerian youth have been paralyzed by fear and a lack of opportunities. The use of Shakespearean language ("every bound man in his own hand") underscores the universal nature of the struggle for freedom and the need for individual agency. The final stanza is a powerful conclusion to the poem, reminding readers that even when messengers are killed and messages suppressed, the truth cannot be silenced. The poet seems to suggest that change is possible, even in the face of seemingly insurmountable obstacles. Overall, "Indigenous Saga" is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that speaks to the challenges facing Nigeria and the need for honesty, wisdom, and action in the face of injustice. The poet's use of vivid imagery, strong language, and references to Nigerian culture and history make the poem both accessible and impactful, ensuring that its message will resonate with readers long after they have finished reading.




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