Give It All To Gain More Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AAA BBB CADA DEEFFGHIJF AKA FHH LAMM NOPO EQELEERE STS UEU BAVBJB LBL WBXBYB ZA2KZ B2C2D2E2 MMF2MBG2B

Remember remember rememberA
let go and surrenderA
to sustain your soul so tenderA
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Be ready to give it allB
to stand tallB
after the inevitable fallB
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What's a prayerC
but an expression of desireA
submitted to GodD
for a desire that's higherA
-
GodD
Please help us seeE
the impediments to TheeE
Help us let go of shameF
and all pursuit of fameF
And if it be Your willG
Please relieve this painH
never the lessI
all glory to OneJ
all the sameF
-
Remember Remember RememberA
to openly allowK
enlightening souls' vital emberA
-
Through the wound They cameF
through cuts burns and painH
to save from illusions reignH
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AskingL
to surrenderA
the needless fightM
and stop hiding from the LightM
-
Reminding thoughtsN
that welcome the double bindO
and not seeking all at onceP
in patience you'll be sure to findO
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In moments choosing to seeE
Hands guideQ
like leaves falling from Their treeE
SurrenderingL
to again beE
Truly FreeE
Like peaceful wavesR
reaching out from the seaE
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Surrendering what you've knownS
for what you don'tT
shines a light on more to be shownS
-
Start by choosing to beginU
and winning onlyE
when others winU
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Surrender it allB
RememberA
LoveV
allows the fallB
while staying openJ
to hear the Ultimate callB
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Let go of categorical thinkingL
Cycling one to allB
from first to last moments blinkingL
-
Give of your heartW
don't stallB
Go with shoulders backX
standing tall after the fallB
Face the voices who sayY
you're better off being smallB
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With all humility amassedZ
like the reedA2
bowK
till hellish storms have passedZ
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ThenB2
In utter darknessC2
step towardD2
embracing its beautiful starknessE2
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There you'll find who birthed nightM
and who created all that's BrightM
Embraced byF2
Hope Love and LightM
In whom we entrust our fallB
The One The InfiniteG2
The All in allB

Evan Fitzgerald
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/19/2021

Poet's note: An expression of my desire to submit in a poem written to my sons.




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