Give It All To Gain More Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AAA BBB CADA DEEFFGHIJF AKA FHH LAMM NOPO EQELEERE STS UEU BAVBJB LBL WBXBYB ZA2KZ B2C2D2E2 MMF2MBG2BRemember remember remember | A |
let go and surrender | A |
to sustain your soul so tender | A |
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Be ready to give it all | B |
to stand tall | B |
after the inevitable fall | B |
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What's a prayer | C |
but an expression of desire | A |
submitted to God | D |
for a desire that's higher | A |
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God | D |
Please help us see | E |
the impediments to Thee | E |
Help us let go of shame | F |
and all pursuit of fame | F |
And if it be Your will | G |
Please relieve this pain | H |
never the less | I |
all glory to One | J |
all the same | F |
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Remember Remember Remember | A |
to openly allow | K |
enlightening souls' vital ember | A |
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Through the wound They came | F |
through cuts burns and pain | H |
to save from illusions reign | H |
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Asking | L |
to surrender | A |
the needless fight | M |
and stop hiding from the Light | M |
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Reminding thoughts | N |
that welcome the double bind | O |
and not seeking all at once | P |
in patience you'll be sure to find | O |
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In moments choosing to see | E |
Hands guide | Q |
like leaves falling from Their tree | E |
Surrendering | L |
to again be | E |
Truly Free | E |
Like peaceful waves | R |
reaching out from the sea | E |
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Surrendering what you've known | S |
for what you don't | T |
shines a light on more to be shown | S |
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Start by choosing to begin | U |
and winning only | E |
when others win | U |
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Surrender it all | B |
Remember | A |
Love | V |
allows the fall | B |
while staying open | J |
to hear the Ultimate call | B |
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Let go of categorical thinking | L |
Cycling one to all | B |
from first to last moments blinking | L |
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Give of your heart | W |
don't stall | B |
Go with shoulders back | X |
standing tall after the fall | B |
Face the voices who say | Y |
you're better off being small | B |
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With all humility amassed | Z |
like the reed | A2 |
bow | K |
till hellish storms have passed | Z |
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Then | B2 |
In utter darkness | C2 |
step toward | D2 |
embracing its beautiful starkness | E2 |
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There you'll find who birthed night | M |
and who created all that's Bright | M |
Embraced by | F2 |
Hope Love and Light | M |
In whom we entrust our fall | B |
The One The Infinite | G2 |
The All in all | B |
Evan Fitzgerald
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/19/2021
Poet's note: An expression of my desire to submit in a poem written to my sons.
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