I Couldn't Quit Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AAA ABCDE AFAGG AHHHH AIIAJ AAAAK| I couldn't quit | A |
| Though I wanted to but couldn't quit | A |
| 'Cause my worth will be reflected from doing my bit | A |
| - | |
| I couldn't quit | A |
| The sun showed me to rise after being set | B |
| the water flowing taught me to always be in a steady state | C |
| the sky pinched me to not be scared by the dark clouds | D |
| the mountains taught me keep moving up in my downs | E |
| - | |
| I couldn't quit | A |
| The melodious chirping of the birds in the dawn | F |
| just shivered me to let go of my dicomfort | A |
| the wind touched me softly like the bird's feathers | G |
| to encourage me to erase my life's bothers | G |
| - | |
| I couldn't quit | A |
| The loved ones didn't let me stay lonely and oblivious | H |
| which did give me a hope to be ambitious | H |
| the blessings of the parents did do mircales | H |
| which didn't let me to look at my obstacles | H |
| - | |
| I couldn't quit | A |
| The sigh of relief pestered me to do more | I |
| even if the hindrances are at the shore | I |
| lessoned by the daylight and the dark night | A |
| reminded me to be awaited for my time | J |
| - | |
| I couldn't quit | A |
| My birth won't have any worth if I quit | A |
| to be eternal in the memories with whom I meet | A |
| neither problems are enemies nor success is the comrade | A |
| we all have to be valorous to show ourselves we remain | K |
Subha Laxmi Moharana
Poet's note: This poem is 'bout how I couldn't quit . Through this poem one can be motivated to always move forward
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