Midnight Hour Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABBCDEEFGHHAAIIJJKK

Pensive dreamlike awake and restless wonderA
where the faded Moon invites to ponderA
Boisterous thoughts from delicate irrelevanceB
redeeming midnight charm and eloquenceB
Changes that wakens the inner Dragon aboutC
glaring annoyance and swords to temper amountD
Struggling emphasis of conscience truth to hideE
kindled by some muse to open that wound so wideE
Some frail memories in still erected shameF
perhaps this neglected spot needs some refrainG
Rich with spoils in time not seeing the wholeH
scattered some genuine flow of the soulH
I touched a heart that engaged in loving fireA
awaken ecstasies to promised ever after desireA
Lonely contemplation let me to this artless taleI
vulnerable heart and embarrassing forlorn failI
A shrouded dusky veil disappeared as dustJ
while moon light rays fill the dark adjustJ
The strange of heart without a restK
knows that love is a ever refining questK

Robert Rittel
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/08/2021



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Ifeanyichukwu Onwughalu: Hey Robert, you're such a damn good poet. I completely relate with your poem here as the content resonates universality of love, desire, infatuation, and all that go with it.

Can you amend the last line to read

"knows that love is an ever refining quest"

Let the "a" be replaced with "an"

Good job!


 

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