True Self: Living Bipolar Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDB EFFGH IIJAK LMEGN OIPQR| It looks like you've been smiling for too long | A |
| Can't control your own self | B |
| People don't know who you really are | C |
| Cause you are different when it comes to the outside world | D |
| Cause you can't control your self | B |
| - | |
| Every day turns a day Right | E |
| But mine's different | F |
| Cause I am different | F |
| Different from what you see | G |
| Different from what you've expected | H |
| - | |
| You thought that I am the person that you're talking to | I |
| Smiling and laughing with you | I |
| Acting weirdly about things that don't exist | J |
| But you are wrong | A |
| I don't know who that is | K |
| - | |
| Living with Bipolar disorder | L |
| Is a constant nightmare | M |
| Extreme mood swings every day and night | E |
| Depression equips up on you quietly | G |
| You're telling yourself its temporary and it'll pass but it does not | N |
| - | |
| You suddenly find yourself to a different person | O |
| Not knowing that its not you | I |
| But then you realized and regret it | P |
| You may get some help | Q |
| Or attempt suicide | R |
Richmond Gellez
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Richmond Gellez: Thank you! I'll try
Richmond Gellez: Thank you so much! yah more metaphors, but its not the way it is, bc its supposed to be a Spoken Poetry... This was one of my first Poetries during my depression a years ago... yet I wasn't still good from making any poetries there.... but now things has changed I made 50+ poetries about depression, and they are more likely to be metaphorical....
here's my sample,
The skies above comforted thee
For all these years, that I could see
Shining down between my safe haven,
Through forth what's below worth savin'.
Oh Sky within the moon!
I worship your beauty
For Your Light above cleanses thy room.
Between your shimmering beauty.
Is it good? thank you so much again for your comment :))
Mmasetshaba: I Love it.
And I love how you so specific in it.
try using more metaphors to cause some curiosity towards the reader . trust me it's good
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