True Self: Living Bipolar Poem Rhyme Scheme and AnalysisRhyme Scheme: ABCDB EFFGH IIJAK LMEGN OIPQR
|It looks like you've been smiling for too long||A|
|Can't control your own self||B|
|People don't know who you really are||C|
|Cause you are different when it comes to the outside world||D|
|Cause you can't control your self||B|
|Every day turns a day Right||E|
|But mine's different||F|
|Cause I am different||F|
|Different from what you see||G|
|Different from what you've expected||H|
|You thought that I am the person that you're talking to||I|
|Smiling and laughing with you||I|
|Acting weirdly about things that don't exist||J|
|But you are wrong||A|
|I don't know who that is||K|
|Living with Bipolar disorder||L|
|Is a constant nightmare||M|
|Extreme mood swings every day and night||E|
|Depression equips up on you quietly||G|
|You're telling yourself its temporary and it'll pass but it does not||N|
|You suddenly find yourself to a different person||O|
|Not knowing that its not you||I|
|But then you realized and regret it||P|
|You may get some help||Q|
|Or attempt suicide||R|
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Write your comment about True Self: Living Bipolar poem by Richmond Gellez
Richmond Gellez: Thank you! I'll try
Richmond Gellez: Thank you so much! yah more metaphors, but its not the way it is, bc its supposed to be a Spoken Poetry... This was one of my first Poetries during my depression a years ago... yet I wasn't still good from making any poetries there.... but now things has changed I made 50+ poetries about depression, and they are more likely to be metaphorical....
here's my sample,
The skies above comforted thee
For all these years, that I could see
Shining down between my safe haven,
Through forth what's below worth savin'.
Oh Sky within the moon!
I worship your beauty
For Your Light above cleanses thy room.
Between your shimmering beauty.
Is it good? thank you so much again for your comment :))
Mmasetshaba: I Love it.
And I love how you so specific in it.
try using more metaphors to cause some curiosity towards the reader . trust me it's good