My Struggle Out Of Bed Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: A B C D D E F G D H I J| Lying down I was still looking for a reason to jerk off of my bed and scream | A |
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| As tides only existed on massive volumes of water while being watched by the loyal and beautiful face of the moon | B |
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| It was also found on my mind | C |
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| While I lay still my mind was a ruffle of negative energy | D |
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| A battlefield of thoughts that would eventually turn to a stream of baseless imaginations which without even a little scratch of time would turn to a reality | D |
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| The ceiling was of no help I was still like a half bottle of water thrown mercilessly until it gave up the strength to roll I kept staring at it like it had the sun that wasn't there | E |
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| No stagnant cloud was within my view yet I could feel myself rising softly from that chamber you'll call a bed | F |
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| My pillow only pulled my head down with hands I couldn't see or feel At least if I was tied with ropes I'll know I had a chance of escape | G |
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| But stiff I was like gravity held a grudge against me | D |
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| Breaking loose would be like conquering the ocean Something I couldn't do even in my dreams | H |
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| Hope hope hope I kept muttering to myself wishing that somehow I'll break loose of these chains | I |
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| I was placed immobile and contained I wasn't locked I was just tired I just woke up | J |
Nwabugwu Chukwudumebi
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/13/2020
Poet's note: This is a short text on how I struggle to get out of bed, reasons why I find it difficult to go on with my daily routine due to my battle with laziness and what i face each time I wake up from bed.
As i was writing this poem, i felt the express my feelings in words especially the extreme tiredness i feel each time I wake up from bed.
I'm a quiet person with a loud mind and I love to express myself in written words as I always find a solution to my issues through this method. This poem helped me know my mistake as it is the first step to finding a solution.
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