Between Augusts Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFGHIJ KLMF NOPQ RFST EULV AW XYZ BA2A IP PB2C2 D2A| They said loss is common | A |
| as if that made it lighter | B |
| as if a breaking heart | C |
| could be explained away | D |
| - | |
| August th | E |
| the day silence answered me | F |
| Three months of hope | G |
| of whispered dreams | H |
| of a child I had already begun to love | I |
| gone without a goodbye | J |
| - | |
| And still | K |
| I carried that absence | L |
| like a quiet shadow | M |
| no one else could fully see | F |
| - | |
| But time | N |
| time has a way of holding both | O |
| sorrow and surprise | P |
| in the same hands | Q |
| - | |
| Because the next August came | R |
| not empty | F |
| not silent | S |
| but full | T |
| - | |
| August th | E |
| a cry instead of quiet | U |
| breath instead of absence | L |
| life placed gently into my arms | V |
| - | |
| Elianah | A |
| An answered prayer | W |
| - | |
| And somehow | X |
| she did not erase the loss | Y |
| she sat beside it | Z |
| - | |
| A living reminder | B |
| that even after breaking | A2 |
| the heart can still open again | A |
| - | |
| That love does not replace love | I |
| it multiplies | P |
| - | |
| So now I carry both Augusts | P |
| one that took | B2 |
| and one that gave | C2 |
| - | |
| Both sacred | D2 |
| Both mine | A |
Miriam Onyancha
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/28/2026
Poet's note: The poem was written as a way of holding two deeply connected moments in one narrative:
A first August marked by loss, longing, and silence after a three-month pregnancy ended.
A second August, one year later, marked by the birth of your daughter, Elianah—your “answered prayer.”
It becomes a story of contrast: absence and presence, grief and joy, silence and a first cry.
It is a self reflection based on real life events. The poem helps me reflect on life in different perspectives as it brings forth joy and agony, good and bad but in the end, it is life, unforgettable.
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