Between Augusts Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFGHIJ KLMF NOPQ RFST EULV AW XYZ BA2A IP PB2C2 D2A

They said loss is commonA
as if that made it lighterB
as if a breaking heartC
could be explained awayD
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August thE
the day silence answered meF
Three months of hopeG
of whispered dreamsH
of a child I had already begun to loveI
gone without a goodbyeJ
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And stillK
I carried that absenceL
like a quiet shadowM
no one else could fully seeF
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But timeN
time has a way of holding bothO
sorrow and surpriseP
in the same handsQ
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Because the next August cameR
not emptyF
not silentS
but fullT
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August thE
a cry instead of quietU
breath instead of absenceL
life placed gently into my armsV
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ElianahA
An answered prayerW
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And somehowX
she did not erase the lossY
she sat beside itZ
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A living reminderB
that even after breakingA2
the heart can still open againA
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That love does not replace loveI
it multipliesP
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So now I carry both AugustsP
one that tookB2
and one that gaveC2
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Both sacredD2
Both mineA

Miriam Onyancha
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/28/2026

Poet's note: The poem was written as a way of holding two deeply connected moments in one narrative: A first August marked by loss, longing, and silence after a three-month pregnancy ended. A second August, one year later, marked by the birth of your daughter, Elianah—your “answered prayer.” It becomes a story of contrast: absence and presence, grief and joy, silence and a first cry. It is a self reflection based on real life events. The poem helps me reflect on life in different perspectives as it brings forth joy and agony, good and bad but in the end, it is life, unforgettable.




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