My Loving Heart Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: A BCDEFA GHHIHJKA LMNOPQA RSTUVA WPHXHYA ZA2BB2C2AMy loving heart | A |
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Isn't it so rich n beautiful | B |
It's warmth can melt candle wax | C |
It's care can put a smile even on the dead | D |
It's beauty attracts even the vultures | E |
Even the wild wolf prey on it | F |
My loving heart | A |
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Should u not HV been this loving | G |
U would HV been able to identify love | H |
Cause you are love yourlf | H |
Most times u taken for granted | I |
Cause all u do is give love | H |
You never even noticed tht u r drained | J |
Until the very end of it all | K |
My loving heart | A |
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Should it not be for u | L |
My departed soul would have still be intact | M |
Should it not be for u my soul would be dancing in joy | N |
But you you kept settling for less | O |
You kept caring where u r not appreciated | P |
Tht is the reason you bleed nonstop | Q |
My loving heart | A |
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Not tht u never saw from the start the grave u were capturing your soul in | R |
You did cz u love selfless u kept believing you will get love in return | S |
You kept showering with gloom of love warming up even hearts hard as stone | T |
You thought u will be recognized | U |
Little did u knw it was not your turn to rejoice | V |
My loving heart | A |
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U bleeds uncontrollable without comfort | W |
Cause where u seek comforts u are rejected | P |
Where u once felt love | H |
You are denied | X |
Where u once pride yourslf | H |
Your very same soul was killed | Y |
My loving heart | A |
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You now sing songs of prayer | Z |
Nyt n day hoping for miracle of restoration | A2 |
Fighting for a lost battle | B |
The more you chase the harder it becomes to catch | B2 |
The more u care the more the damage to your soul | C2 |
My loving heart | A |
Maite Lemekwane
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