My Loving Heart Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCDEFA GHHIHJKA LMNOPQA RSTUVA WPHXHYA ZA2BB2C2A

My loving heartA
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Isn't it so rich n beautifulB
It's warmth can melt candle waxC
It's care can put a smile even on the deadD
It's beauty attracts even the vulturesE
Even the wild wolf prey on itF
My loving heartA
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Should u not HV been this lovingG
U would HV been able to identify loveH
Cause you are love yourlfH
Most times u taken for grantedI
Cause all u do is give loveH
You never even noticed tht u r drainedJ
Until the very end of it allK
My loving heartA
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Should it not be for uL
My departed soul would have still be intactM
Should it not be for u my soul would be dancing in joyN
But you you kept settling for lessO
You kept caring where u r not appreciatedP
Tht is the reason you bleed nonstopQ
My loving heartA
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Not tht u never saw from the start the grave u were capturing your soul inR
You did cz u love selfless u kept believing you will get love in returnS
You kept showering with gloom of love warming up even hearts hard as stoneT
You thought u will be recognizedU
Little did u knw it was not your turn to rejoiceV
My loving heartA
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U bleeds uncontrollable without comfortW
Cause where u seek comforts u are rejectedP
Where u once felt loveH
You are deniedX
Where u once pride yourslfH
Your very same soul was killedY
My loving heartA
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You now sing songs of prayerZ
Nyt n day hoping for miracle of restorationA2
Fighting for a lost battleB
The more you chase the harder it becomes to catchB2
The more u care the more the damage to your soulC2
My loving heartA

Maite Lemekwane
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/23/2019



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