My Love Tour Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL MMNN MMOO PPFF FFFF QQFFI found a rose in the depth of the sea | A |
The sight of which had soared my glee | A |
Was I really myself or lost in a dream | B |
My this rare tour should make a theme | B |
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My aims are broad I don't know how to start | C |
How can I say the word that fills my heart | C |
To this gentle soul that takes my whole | D |
Who wins my minds and takes control | D |
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I am worried in the heart to make a move | E |
Hello Should I say to start and prove | E |
Myself as a man and to know her mind | F |
The guts to talk my tongue couldn't find | F |
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Or I first ask her name to show my feel | G |
With a smile on my face to make it real | G |
Common O poor heart why are you afraid | H |
This is a chance you had better upgrade | H |
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At the sight of her face I moved onwards | I |
Ehm I was suddenly short of words | I |
How my hearts did beat as if to burst | J |
Is it so hard to show my mind at first | J |
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Excuse me my mind wanted me to say | K |
Or Can I see you could have been OK | K |
Thus was I scared to give it just a try | L |
And wondered what could be her reply | L |
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Or could I use her close friend as a cover | M |
To present me to her as her silent lover | M |
Or could I put the whole thing in writing | N |
And prove how great she is to my liking | N |
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I made up my mind to go for the latter | M |
I wondered how best to launch the matter | M |
Oh I could see how hard to be a real dude | O |
So the points of the work for thus include | O |
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The Love was all the pen could write | P |
For hours it shook and feared to recite | P |
The poem of love that filled my mind | F |
Nor my pieces of dream could it rebind | F |
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Then it wrote The Love is as rare as gold | F |
Just as rare as minds would really behold | F |
And could only be found in the depth of the heart | F |
But when found it is hard to be set apart | F |
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Thus I made a move to show my aim | Q |
And tried my best to have a name | Q |
On the list of hope and yet await | F |
The good news to be set on a date | F |
Kehinde Bashir Akinola
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/14/2023
Poet's note: The poem talks about my love journey as it is normally experienced by yound men
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