My Love Tour Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL MMNN MMOO PPFF FFFF QQFF

I found a rose in the depth of the seaA
The sight of which had soared my gleeA
Was I really myself or lost in a dreamB
My this rare tour should make a themeB
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My aims are broad I don't know how to startC
How can I say the word that fills my heartC
To this gentle soul that takes my wholeD
Who wins my minds and takes controlD
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I am worried in the heart to make a moveE
Hello Should I say to start and proveE
Myself as a man and to know her mindF
The guts to talk my tongue couldn't findF
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Or I first ask her name to show my feelG
With a smile on my face to make it realG
Common O poor heart why are you afraidH
This is a chance you had better upgradeH
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At the sight of her face I moved onwardsI
Ehm I was suddenly short of wordsI
How my hearts did beat as if to burstJ
Is it so hard to show my mind at firstJ
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Excuse me my mind wanted me to sayK
Or Can I see you could have been OKK
Thus was I scared to give it just a tryL
And wondered what could be her replyL
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Or could I use her close friend as a coverM
To present me to her as her silent loverM
Or could I put the whole thing in writingN
And prove how great she is to my likingN
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I made up my mind to go for the latterM
I wondered how best to launch the matterM
Oh I could see how hard to be a real dudeO
So the points of the work for thus includeO
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The Love was all the pen could writeP
For hours it shook and feared to reciteP
The poem of love that filled my mindF
Nor my pieces of dream could it rebindF
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Then it wrote The Love is as rare as goldF
Just as rare as minds would really beholdF
And could only be found in the depth of the heartF
But when found it is hard to be set apartF
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Thus I made a move to show my aimQ
And tried my best to have a nameQ
On the list of hope and yet awaitF
The good news to be set on a dateF

Kehinde Bashir Akinola
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/14/2023

Poet's note: The poem talks about my love journey as it is normally experienced by yound men




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