Poet Brian Dredan

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A Letter To One I Loved Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEAAFBGHIB GJKLJMNJOPQJRSJ JTCJKKUVFWKXJYJ YZJYA2B2C2YVVAYD2E2A J F2IYD2YEG2G2JEG2EG2E 2G2G2KJ

This is my letterA
To you whom I lovedB
Not long enough norC
Short enough it'sD
Just enough for youE
Not sweet or bitterA
Neither is it sourA
It's just what my heartF
Is saying to you whom I lovedB
The love that's still aliveG
The love that hatred can't killH
The love that'll forever reignI
To you whom I lovedB
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You said you can't liveG
Without meJ
But now you're breathingK
You said your eyes can't blinkL
Without meJ
On them I see more picturesM
You said you can't eatN
Without meJ
And now your arms areO
On the dining tables washedP
You said you can't sleepQ
Without meJ
But your bed is well vanishedR
Your head on itS
You can without meJ
-
You cheated and made meJ
Believe in your sweet liesT
I loved the way yourC
Lips lied to meJ
They were sweet and enticingK
You dragged me onto lovingK
You to the deeper endU
The feeling rubbed offV
The bitterness in my heartF
But thenW
I didn't know I was boardingK
A place of deathX
A flight that'll land meJ
In an island of pain in tearsY
You can without meJ
-
We spent nights of cuddlesY
Cuddles that made me sleep lightZ
Like a new born babyJ
They comforted me all daysY
And my love grew withA2
Every cuddle a dayB2
My heart lit candles thatC2
Brightened the look on my faceY
It never seemed to go offV
But you splashed it offV
You dared hit my heart with a hammerA
Broke it into many small piecesY
Now they're scatteredD2
Nobody can gather themE2
Back togetherA
You can without meJ
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My face is always wetF2
Flooded with tears of painI
My eyes soaked in sournessY
My heart still in pieces scatteredD2
My head in pain headachesY
I just can't live without youE
I'm dead insideG2
I was long burriedG2
None can resurrect meJ
If not youE
I can't take a step aheadG2
Without youE
The pieces of my heartG2
They're scattered come gather themE2
The sword you pierced left a woundG2
That'll never heal if notG2
Not for your nursing it's bleedingK
I can't but you can without meJ

Brian Dredan
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/27/2019



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