The Captain And The Rave Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCB DEDE FGFH IJIJ KLKL MNMO

The Captain says chargeA
But we aren't looking to the fightB
The battle might be hardC
We'd rather burn the lightB
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Rather now than what could beD
The sun shines uncover the blissE
Light up the field and we can seeD
Underneath the shade a hissE
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Cunning time chases and catches upF
We ran a race to loseG
We light up the world matches upF
Live under a bleak excuseH
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Persistence yet we to gainI
Gladly scoop the meat and drinkJ
We escape the waiting painI
Only then to sinkJ
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A blink and we have allK
To spend and not a penny saveL
A crushing wave an endless wallK
And yet we look to the raveL
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Youth emerging like the mossM
A graceful blossom of greenN
But in our rest lie the lossM
One that could have beenO

Adams Dauda
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