The Avatar Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABB CDEE FFGG HHII JJEE KKLL MMNF| The un bodily sphere in realms of conscious | A |
| introverted senses in space ponder precious | A |
| Through deep quiet into different existence | B |
| uncertainties from beyond the distance | B |
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| It felt like fire kindling in my blood | C |
| as I by some strange flowing river stood | D |
| My first reaction is to reassure the sapphire key | E |
| that could unlock some dreadful history | E |
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| Intruders who in their rights had no part | F |
| took memories of true pleasures from natives heart | F |
| Replacing them with digital images to rejoice | G |
| taken on their mind by an artificial happy voice | G |
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| A slender woman smiling waiting at the creek | H |
| been told that another Avatar will join the seek | H |
| She speaks of the feast from the joy and its dying spark | I |
| and the firmament in hollow frightening dark | I |
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| We had to reach the domain of the controlling power | J |
| the glimmering lights from that high grey tower | J |
| Then for those rescued life new seems to be | E |
| for joy provides a purpose reason quality | E |
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| The tower now clearly near and we feel that joyous delight | K |
| as the key absorbs poor energies turning bright | K |
| The rich of worship levitates the yellow bright stone | L |
| deliverance of weary years ended in a squeaky moan | L |
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| At last one tower down while other places are still | M |
| I took that key in protocol of safety goodwill | M |
| Empty shadows by my eyes racing passed | N |
| another world sustained from the bottom of my heart | F |
Robert Rittel
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