Our Nation Is Ill Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABACD EFGG HIJJ KLMN OPQR STBU VBWB X YOZA2 BVBB2 C2D2BE2 VF2G2D2

OUR NATION IS ILLA
Doom Days DrumB
Blood and war on the hillA
The centre is shatteredC
And everyman for himselfD
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No one cares for cureE
The Excellency are pretendersF
The honours are JudasG
And justiceG
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Expensive for the poorH
Affordable for the richI
The Beautiful ones are JailedJ
The Mafias get bailedJ
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The Prince eats the grassK
The Servants eat the CakeL
The Doctors can t diagnoseM
The hospital is over stretchedN
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Tears and sorrowO
At every home and streetP
Hope and fearQ
Hang on every tongueR
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If you ask for justice Like khadir AhmedS
Your citizenship is questionT
If you sing praise like KeyamoB
You are the son of the soilU
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Dare not speak to powerV
That their song has no rhythmB
That their Drum as no patternW
Or Jail is your homeB
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Ask Adeyanju Ask AnikulapoX
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Who will see our tearsY
And dry our rivers of sorrowO
Those who care can not seeZ
Those with sight care notA2
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To heaven we all look up for freedomB
But heaven has no answerV
In our Palm lies freedomB
Freedom comes via the crossB2
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Let all lace their boothC2
And match to the fieldD2
Death or FreedomB
Must be our pledgeE2
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Sit Smile and SufferV
Not our songF2
Blood or peaceG2
Our Nation must be healedD2

Ola Olawale
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/19/2019



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Write your comment about Our Nation Is Ill poem by Ola Olawale


Yusuf Baba Hammed: Wow, Well penned! I love this ❤

It's talking about the society I'm in. The freedom lies in our palms, in our pens.
Mamu Roshid: Fantastic
Casper Agbaje : Interesting, it seeks for freedom, yet fearful in thoughts
Leomascott ocm Ogbuefi : Someday we have our freedom
Ola Olawale: Thanks @ Iyke, Olamide and Ogbuefi.... Am honour!
Iyke Flint: The educationists have to see this! Very awesome!
Olamide: I love this poem. Awesome
Leomascott ocm Ogbuefi : Great and nice poem , captive seeking for freedom
 

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