Too Abstracted Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD BEFG HIJK

I don't know if you have any desiresA
I don't know what you're thinkingB
Every time I look at you I want to read your eyesC
But I can't do it because your expression is not cleanD
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I have the impression that you don't find yourself and you don't know where you're goingB
You don't know what you want either even though I thought I was becoming a sun for youE
That's what I want to be a new sun and a source of hopeF
I want you to breathe new life and feel free with meG
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I want to give you back the joy of life and that you regain your aspirationsH
Let me love you more than anything else and show you all my loveI
The expression on your face is so darkened like a whirlwind in a stormJ
If your soul is swirling in confusion let me bring you back to the shore of happinessK

Oceane Malongo
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 11/03/2020

Poet's note: I watched a nice film of love and tried to take the place of one of the actors. So the actors is expression himself to his lover.




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