Too Abstracted Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD BEFG HIJKI don't know if you have any desires | A |
I don't know what you're thinking | B |
Every time I look at you I want to read your eyes | C |
But I can't do it because your expression is not clean | D |
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I have the impression that you don't find yourself and you don't know where you're going | B |
You don't know what you want either even though I thought I was becoming a sun for you | E |
That's what I want to be a new sun and a source of hope | F |
I want you to breathe new life and feel free with me | G |
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I want to give you back the joy of life and that you regain your aspirations | H |
Let me love you more than anything else and show you all my love | I |
The expression on your face is so darkened like a whirlwind in a storm | J |
If your soul is swirling in confusion let me bring you back to the shore of happiness | K |
Oceane Malongo
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 11/03/2020
Poet's note: I watched a nice film of love and tried to take the place of one of the actors. So the actors is expression himself to his lover.
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