Early Sunset Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDDDEFDGFGHIJKLKMD NDDJDD| If the sun sets for me at dawn | A |
| So that the white in me turns black | B |
| Before I shed off a single milk teeth | C |
| If I vacate that soothsome seat | D |
| That through your efforts I betrothed | D |
| Should you wake up to find LITTLE shoe atop my seat | D |
| So that everything in your world turns YELLOW | E |
| I should pray you catch enough courage | F |
| To SOB my sudden loss in earnest | D |
| To assuage your soul from the mental distress | G |
| May kindness grant you even the least of courage | F |
| To let you freely express | G |
| The immense thrust of traumatising emotions | H |
| Urgently wear on your face | I |
| The abrupt shock of the loss | J |
| The hollowness that you feel | K |
| Feel free to demonstrate your anger for my loss dear mom | L |
| For only you knows what you feel | K |
| Express the disbelief | M |
| The guilt | D |
| And the profound sadness | N |
| Nothing should be compared to the loss of a child | D |
| And there need be no modesty | D |
| About how you handle this massive loss | J |
| When your fears and worries of this sad eventuality | D |
| Finally materialises into concrete reality | D |
Michael Aete
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