The Pre-existence Of My Love Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBACDEBFGH IFFFJAKKLMN AAOAADPBQBM ARAAAKSMBTK UABVWBBXBWBK YBKBMZKA2MB2KC2D2BK| I pre existed in an incredibly remote place outside the universe | A |
| Love was with me and I was an element of love | B |
| The heavenly realm witnessed the pre existence of my love | B |
| My love lived on in a state of inertia for aeons | A |
| And it was seemingly the only one of its kind | C |
| But I was devoid of pleasure and I knew there was something missing | D |
| It was not the nature of my love to continue alone | E |
| I searched the peripheries of infinity for the other element of love | B |
| I bowed down before the Most High at the portals of heaven | F |
| But the forbidden love I sought was located elsewhere | G |
| My persistency grew and thus I extended my wings and gracefully flew away | H |
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| I entered the universe and countless billions of worlds appeared | I |
| I marvelled at the wonders of the new creation | F |
| I stood fearlessly in the core of the largest sun | F |
| And my immortal heart blazed with the fire of eternal passion | F |
| The cosmos expanded and aged planets melted down | J |
| But my indestructible love shone as the glory of a trillion stars | A |
| An intelligent force was communicating telepathically with me | K |
| I followed the faint information in my psyche | K |
| The spirit of my love advanced faster than the speed of light | L |
| My urge for physical love was greater than my desire to live forever | M |
| And nothing could prevent me from pursuing the love I wanted | N |
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| I sensed the existence of an unknown force in deep space | A |
| And I was destined to find out exactly what it was | A |
| The dynamic energy of my love led me to a green sphere | O |
| A vast watery expanse surrounded by dense darkness | A |
| A unique form of life in a galaxy near the centre of the universe | A |
| There I came upon the daughter of love a terrestrial being | D |
| The most beautiful creature I have ever seen | P |
| At last I have discovered the complement of love | B |
| I descended from the cloud and gazed at her in astonishment | Q |
| The sight of this gorgeous mortal being intensified my love | B |
| And I did not intend to go back to my lonely existence without her | M |
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| She felt the presence of an extraterrestrial love she thought existed only in visions | A |
| But she was desirous of knowledge and she was not afraid | R |
| She reached out to me and for the first time I felt powerless | A |
| Though I had infinite love I was very cautious | A |
| She became aggressive and her charm emitted thermonuclear rays | A |
| Her love created a shock wave as many stars exploding simultaneously | K |
| The particle of her love penetrated my force field | S |
| My attempts to control her ended in surrender | M |
| I could not withstand the superlative power of her love | B |
| Her love was more powerful than I imagined | T |
| I thought there was no love strong enough to overpower me | K |
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| I could not possess her or even touch her because I was a disembodied spirit | U |
| But she seduced me and I saw eternity in her fiery eyes | A |
| And I told her about the pre existence of my love | B |
| She showed me the beginning of time an indescribable precept | V |
| The stage where only the source of energy and power exist | W |
| And she spoke highly of the Originator of her love | B |
| Unleashing my full power could not alter the law of love | B |
| Her form was completely different from mine | X |
| We were incompatible beings in all features except our love | B |
| And so I became mortal in order that we could coexist | W |
| Her love and my love combined and became one supernatural love | B |
| And an infinitesimal presence of physical life came to be | K |
| - | |
| Our transgression would not pass unnoticed or go unpunished | Y |
| The whole creation became angry at us for violating the rule of love | B |
| Consequently the Most High separated us permanently | K |
| But He did not annihilate my love | B |
| She received an extremely harsh penalty for her error | M |
| Everything in her world started to dilapidate | Z |
| And her offspring could not live eternally | K |
| Our eros resulted in the destruction of the most complex life form | A2 |
| I could not reverse the situation and save her | M |
| A perfect creature designed to live forever forfeited everlasting life | B2 |
| She aged miserably and lost her beauty | K |
| And eventually she became as the dust from the ground | C2 |
| I roared bitterly as the sound of the loudest thunder and the earth shook | D2 |
| Then I dematerialised and returned to the pre existence of my love | B |
| Where I shall remain in total sadness for longer than eternity | K |
Marlon Pitter
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