The Pre-existence Of My Love Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBACDEBFGH IFFFJAKKLMN AAOAADPBQBM ARAAAKSMBTK UABVWBBXBWBK YBKBMZKA2MB2KC2D2BK

I pre existed in an incredibly remote place outside the universeA
Love was with me and I was an element of loveB
The heavenly realm witnessed the pre existence of my loveB
My love lived on in a state of inertia for aeonsA
And it was seemingly the only one of its kindC
But I was devoid of pleasure and I knew there was something missingD
It was not the nature of my love to continue aloneE
I searched the peripheries of infinity for the other element of loveB
I bowed down before the Most High at the portals of heavenF
But the forbidden love I sought was located elsewhereG
My persistency grew and thus I extended my wings and gracefully flew awayH
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I entered the universe and countless billions of worlds appearedI
I marvelled at the wonders of the new creationF
I stood fearlessly in the core of the largest sunF
And my immortal heart blazed with the fire of eternal passionF
The cosmos expanded and aged planets melted downJ
But my indestructible love shone as the glory of a trillion starsA
An intelligent force was communicating telepathically with meK
I followed the faint information in my psycheK
The spirit of my love advanced faster than the speed of lightL
My urge for physical love was greater than my desire to live foreverM
And nothing could prevent me from pursuing the love I wantedN
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I sensed the existence of an unknown force in deep spaceA
And I was destined to find out exactly what it wasA
The dynamic energy of my love led me to a green sphereO
A vast watery expanse surrounded by dense darknessA
A unique form of life in a galaxy near the centre of the universeA
There I came upon the daughter of love a terrestrial beingD
The most beautiful creature I have ever seenP
At last I have discovered the complement of loveB
I descended from the cloud and gazed at her in astonishmentQ
The sight of this gorgeous mortal being intensified my loveB
And I did not intend to go back to my lonely existence without herM
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She felt the presence of an extraterrestrial love she thought existed only in visionsA
But she was desirous of knowledge and she was not afraidR
She reached out to me and for the first time I felt powerlessA
Though I had infinite love I was very cautiousA
She became aggressive and her charm emitted thermonuclear raysA
Her love created a shock wave as many stars exploding simultaneouslyK
The particle of her love penetrated my force fieldS
My attempts to control her ended in surrenderM
I could not withstand the superlative power of her loveB
Her love was more powerful than I imaginedT
I thought there was no love strong enough to overpower meK
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I could not possess her or even touch her because I was a disembodied spiritU
But she seduced me and I saw eternity in her fiery eyesA
And I told her about the pre existence of my loveB
She showed me the beginning of time an indescribable preceptV
The stage where only the source of energy and power existW
And she spoke highly of the Originator of her loveB
Unleashing my full power could not alter the law of loveB
Her form was completely different from mineX
We were incompatible beings in all features except our loveB
And so I became mortal in order that we could coexistW
Her love and my love combined and became one supernatural loveB
And an infinitesimal presence of physical life came to beK
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Our transgression would not pass unnoticed or go unpunishedY
The whole creation became angry at us for violating the rule of loveB
Consequently the Most High separated us permanentlyK
But He did not annihilate my loveB
She received an extremely harsh penalty for her errorM
Everything in her world started to dilapidateZ
And her offspring could not live eternallyK
Our eros resulted in the destruction of the most complex life formA2
I could not reverse the situation and save herM
A perfect creature designed to live forever forfeited everlasting lifeB2
She aged miserably and lost her beautyK
And eventually she became as the dust from the groundC2
I roared bitterly as the sound of the loudest thunder and the earth shookD2
Then I dematerialised and returned to the pre existence of my loveB
Where I shall remain in total sadness for longer than eternityK

Marlon Pitter
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/25/2019



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