The Pre-existence Of My Love Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBACDEBFGH IFFFJAKKLMN AAOAADPBQBM ARAAAKSMBTK UABVWBBXBWBK YBKBMZKA2MB2KC2D2BKI pre existed in an incredibly remote place outside the universe | A |
Love was with me and I was an element of love | B |
The heavenly realm witnessed the pre existence of my love | B |
My love lived on in a state of inertia for aeons | A |
And it was seemingly the only one of its kind | C |
But I was devoid of pleasure and I knew there was something missing | D |
It was not the nature of my love to continue alone | E |
I searched the peripheries of infinity for the other element of love | B |
I bowed down before the Most High at the portals of heaven | F |
But the forbidden love I sought was located elsewhere | G |
My persistency grew and thus I extended my wings and gracefully flew away | H |
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I entered the universe and countless billions of worlds appeared | I |
I marvelled at the wonders of the new creation | F |
I stood fearlessly in the core of the largest sun | F |
And my immortal heart blazed with the fire of eternal passion | F |
The cosmos expanded and aged planets melted down | J |
But my indestructible love shone as the glory of a trillion stars | A |
An intelligent force was communicating telepathically with me | K |
I followed the faint information in my psyche | K |
The spirit of my love advanced faster than the speed of light | L |
My urge for physical love was greater than my desire to live forever | M |
And nothing could prevent me from pursuing the love I wanted | N |
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I sensed the existence of an unknown force in deep space | A |
And I was destined to find out exactly what it was | A |
The dynamic energy of my love led me to a green sphere | O |
A vast watery expanse surrounded by dense darkness | A |
A unique form of life in a galaxy near the centre of the universe | A |
There I came upon the daughter of love a terrestrial being | D |
The most beautiful creature I have ever seen | P |
At last I have discovered the complement of love | B |
I descended from the cloud and gazed at her in astonishment | Q |
The sight of this gorgeous mortal being intensified my love | B |
And I did not intend to go back to my lonely existence without her | M |
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She felt the presence of an extraterrestrial love she thought existed only in visions | A |
But she was desirous of knowledge and she was not afraid | R |
She reached out to me and for the first time I felt powerless | A |
Though I had infinite love I was very cautious | A |
She became aggressive and her charm emitted thermonuclear rays | A |
Her love created a shock wave as many stars exploding simultaneously | K |
The particle of her love penetrated my force field | S |
My attempts to control her ended in surrender | M |
I could not withstand the superlative power of her love | B |
Her love was more powerful than I imagined | T |
I thought there was no love strong enough to overpower me | K |
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I could not possess her or even touch her because I was a disembodied spirit | U |
But she seduced me and I saw eternity in her fiery eyes | A |
And I told her about the pre existence of my love | B |
She showed me the beginning of time an indescribable precept | V |
The stage where only the source of energy and power exist | W |
And she spoke highly of the Originator of her love | B |
Unleashing my full power could not alter the law of love | B |
Her form was completely different from mine | X |
We were incompatible beings in all features except our love | B |
And so I became mortal in order that we could coexist | W |
Her love and my love combined and became one supernatural love | B |
And an infinitesimal presence of physical life came to be | K |
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Our transgression would not pass unnoticed or go unpunished | Y |
The whole creation became angry at us for violating the rule of love | B |
Consequently the Most High separated us permanently | K |
But He did not annihilate my love | B |
She received an extremely harsh penalty for her error | M |
Everything in her world started to dilapidate | Z |
And her offspring could not live eternally | K |
Our eros resulted in the destruction of the most complex life form | A2 |
I could not reverse the situation and save her | M |
A perfect creature designed to live forever forfeited everlasting life | B2 |
She aged miserably and lost her beauty | K |
And eventually she became as the dust from the ground | C2 |
I roared bitterly as the sound of the loudest thunder and the earth shook | D2 |
Then I dematerialised and returned to the pre existence of my love | B |
Where I shall remain in total sadness for longer than eternity | K |
Marlon Pitter
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