Poet Marlon Pitter

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The Love That Broke My Heart Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCDEFG HIHJBJ KDHDL IMHNOJ HJEHII PHQDJ A RCAEAI HIHDBJ SIBDL IMHDJ IIIHI IPTQDJ

New versionA
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God gave me a heart to search for loveB
But I was living without a lover for a long timeC
One day someone came to me unexpectedlyD
I saw a Spanish girl walking alone in the rainE
Her natural beauty attracted my eyesF
The raindrops were bouncing off her pretty faceG
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I offered to share my large umbrella with herH
She expressed her gratitude to me for my kindnessI
And we hurried across the road togetherH
I felt the affection coming for her heartJ
For the first time in my life I found loveB
But she came into my world to break my heartJ
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I was so anxious to meet a girl before she cameK
And I shed many tears when she left meD
I loved her more than anyone could ever love herH
But I could not force her to stay with meD
Though I tried I could not convince her not to goL
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I lost my sweet girlfriend because of my b tiseI
The grief of losing her is so unbearableM
It was a misfortune to love her and lose herH
But the failure was definitely worth itN
I cannot narrate the sadness that I am feelingO
How I miss the love that broke my heartJ
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It was a good experience to fall in love with herH
Love was joyous and delightful at the startJ
But in the end it brought sorrow and painE
Now I still think about the day I met herH
I remember the chill and the big raindropsI
She laughed when I mentioned her funny shoesI
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My beloved is no longer a part of my lifeP
All I have is a cherished photograph of herH
I knew that my happiness would end somedayQ
But I did not expect to lose it so quicklyD
Why did love do such a cruel thing to my heartJ
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Original versionA
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God gave me a heart to fall in love with a girlR
But I was living without a lover for a long timeC
I looked on the sidewalk and suddenly there was someoneA
A Spanish girl was standing alone in the rainE
Her natural beauty caught my attentionA
The raindrops were bouncing off her pretty faceI
-
I offered to share my large umbrella with herH
She expressed her gratitude to me for my kindnessI
And we hurriedly crossed the street togetherH
I felt the energy of love all around meD
For the first time in my life I found loveB
But it was a love that came to break my heartJ
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I was so eager to meet a girl before she arrivedS
And when she left me I shed many tearsI
I loved her more than anyone could ever loveB
But I couldn t force her to her stay with meD
Though I tried I couldn t convince her not to goL
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I lost the only good thing I had because of my ignoranceI
The pain of losing her is so unbearableM
I loved and lost but it was definitely worth the failureH
How can I undo the sadness that has overwhelmed meD
I wish I could get back the love that broke my heartJ
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In the beginning love is full of sweetness and kindnessI
But in the end it brings so much bitternessI
I remember the chill and the big raindropsI
And I still think about the day I met herH
She smiled when I mentioned her funny shoesI
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Falling in love with her was a great experienceI
Even though she s no longer a part of my lifeP
I only have one cherished photograph of my belovedT
I knew that my happiness would end somedayQ
But I didn t want to lose it so quicklyD
Why did love do such a cruel thing to my heartJ

Marlon Pitter
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/04/2020



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