The Blues Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBCBD EFGHEI BJKLBM DFCEBN

When you told me that you were leavingA
It deeply distressed meB
Honestly I couldn t act rationallyB
I didn t beg you not to goC
And when you left meB
I didn t beg you to come backD
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Honey I didn t want to lose youE
But I said nothing to convince you to stayF
I knew that I was wrongG
My heart was filled with regretH
But I didn t apologize to youE
And I didn t ask for your forgivenessI
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You were so angry with meB
Did you think I was affected by ego or prideJ
No that s not what happenedK
I was going through a rough time in my lifeL
And I just gave up easilyB
Whatever is meant to happen will happenM
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Now I want you to take me backD
But I don t know what to sayF
What can say that you don t already knowC
You knew that I loved youE
And yet you broke up with meB
My love for you didn t make a differenceN

Marlon Pitter
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/20/2022



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