"in Time, I Will" Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEF GHI JBK LMN

You were lying in bed on the wardA
We spoke on the phone after visiting hoursB
And we texted each other in the nightC
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I wanted you to brighten up my heartD
And place a rainbow in my gray skyE
You sincerely said In time I willF
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I honestly didn t expect you to say thisG
But your response comforted meH
And I waited for you to keep your wordI
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Even though you meant the things you saidJ
You were unable to fulfil your desiresB
Perhaps you weren t thinking straightK
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You made a promise that you couldn t keepL
But that didn t stop me from loving youM
I still think about the promise you madeN

Marlon Pitter
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/28/2020



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