Could It Be? Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABB CCCDEE FFDEE GGHHH IJKJ LLMLLN ABABB CCCDEE FFDEE GGHHH IJKJ LLMLLWith everything that life has to offer | A |
There's so much to be enjoyed | B |
But the pleasures of sleeplessness I suffer | A |
Is the one I cannot avoid | B |
could it be that I may be paranoid | B |
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Experience is the best teacher now I understand | C |
Life didn't turn out as I had planned | C |
All along I have been living in Dreamland | C |
I had many visions | D |
which could not be brought into action | E |
Could it be that I lacked determination | E |
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Things looks fine on other people | F |
My success seemed to be cripple | F |
Doubting my own worth because of comparisons | D |
Negative thinking is like poison | E |
Could it be that I'm exhausting my mind for no reason | E |
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Friends are around but can't talk to | G |
As for family they are untrue | G |
They are the causes of my downfall | H |
My mind wonders it's like I can just leave all | H |
Could it be that my mind is in a cow stall | H |
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The feeling of being useless creeps in | I |
You will amount to nothing these are the words I grew up hearing | J |
My self confidence decreased | K |
With no support I had no one cheering | J |
- | |
I smile when in public pressure piles up when I'm alone | L |
You can't smell my struggles they are not a cologne | L |
Only the pot knows how hot the fire is | M |
I've also learnt to stand on my own | L |
Could it be that mm grown | L |
Could it be | N |
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With everything that life has to offer | A |
There's so much to be enjoyed | B |
But the pleasures of sleeplessness I suffer | A |
Is the one I cannot avoid | B |
could it be that I may be paranoid | B |
- | |
Experience is the best teacher now I understand | C |
Life didn't turn out as I had planned | C |
All along I have been living in Dreamland | C |
I had many visions | D |
which could not be brought into action | E |
Could it be that I lacked determination | E |
- | |
Things looks fine on other people | F |
My success seemed to be cripple | F |
Doubting my own worth because of comparisons | D |
Negative thinking is like poison | E |
Could it be that I'm exhausting my mind for no reason | E |
- | |
Friends are around but can't talk to | G |
As for family they are untrue | G |
They are the causes of my downfall | H |
My mind wonders it's like I can just leave all | H |
Could it be that my mind is in a cow stall | H |
- | |
The feeling of being useless creeps in | I |
You will amount to nothing these are the words I grew up hearing | J |
My self confidence decreased | K |
With no support I had no one cheering | J |
- | |
I smile when in public pressure piles up when I'm alone | L |
You can't smell my struggles they are not a cologne | L |
Only the pot knows how hot the fire is | M |
I've also learnt to stand on my own | L |
Could it be that I'm full grown | L |
James Ntivane
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