Could It Be? Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABB CCCDEE FFDEE GGHHH IJKJ LLMLLN ABABB CCCDEE FFDEE GGHHH IJKJ LLMLL

With everything that life has to offerA
There's so much to be enjoyedB
But the pleasures of sleeplessness I sufferA
Is the one I cannot avoidB
could it be that I may be paranoidB
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Experience is the best teacher now I understandC
Life didn't turn out as I had plannedC
All along I have been living in DreamlandC
I had many visionsD
which could not be brought into actionE
Could it be that I lacked determinationE
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Things looks fine on other peopleF
My success seemed to be crippleF
Doubting my own worth because of comparisonsD
Negative thinking is like poisonE
Could it be that I'm exhausting my mind for no reasonE
-
Friends are around but can't talk toG
As for family they are untrueG
They are the causes of my downfallH
My mind wonders it's like I can just leave allH
Could it be that my mind is in a cow stallH
-
The feeling of being useless creeps inI
You will amount to nothing these are the words I grew up hearingJ
My self confidence decreasedK
With no support I had no one cheeringJ
-
I smile when in public pressure piles up when I'm aloneL
You can't smell my struggles they are not a cologneL
Only the pot knows how hot the fire isM
I've also learnt to stand on my ownL
Could it be that mm grownL
Could it beN
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With everything that life has to offerA
There's so much to be enjoyedB
But the pleasures of sleeplessness I sufferA
Is the one I cannot avoidB
could it be that I may be paranoidB
-
Experience is the best teacher now I understandC
Life didn't turn out as I had plannedC
All along I have been living in DreamlandC
I had many visionsD
which could not be brought into actionE
Could it be that I lacked determinationE
-
Things looks fine on other peopleF
My success seemed to be crippleF
Doubting my own worth because of comparisonsD
Negative thinking is like poisonE
Could it be that I'm exhausting my mind for no reasonE
-
Friends are around but can't talk toG
As for family they are untrueG
They are the causes of my downfallH
My mind wonders it's like I can just leave allH
Could it be that my mind is in a cow stallH
-
The feeling of being useless creeps inI
You will amount to nothing these are the words I grew up hearingJ
My self confidence decreasedK
With no support I had no one cheeringJ
-
I smile when in public pressure piles up when I'm aloneL
You can't smell my struggles they are not a cologneL
Only the pot knows how hot the fire isM
I've also learnt to stand on my ownL
Could it be that I'm full grownL

James Ntivane
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/03/2022



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