Our Nation's Ordeal. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBB CDCD EEBB CDCD BBFG CDCD HHII CDCD JBBEEOur Land of plenty is empty politically and economically dry rather than being wet | A |
To most of our natural and mineral resources the cabals have like cankerworms ate | B |
Revolution Revolution Like that of Luther King Jr till when shall we wait | B |
Is our Nation s unity that of love or one filled with passion of hate | B |
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This is nothing but our nation s ordeal | C |
Black cabals and foreign mafias usurping our national cake | D |
Is Malabu oil not a shady deal | C |
Deceiving the masses to be so real not knowing they were partly fake | D |
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We say we are part of UN but are United Nations actually united against evil | E |
When would White Angel become Black Angel and Black Devil a White Devil | E |
Disorientation Disorientation Like that of Mahatma Ghandi till when shall we wait | B |
Early civilization from Egypt makes Africa and other continents in no standard mate | B |
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This is nothing but our nation s ordeal | C |
Black cabals and foreign mafias usurping our national cake | D |
Is Oil subsidy not a shady deal | C |
Deceiving the masses to be so real not knowing they were partly fake | D |
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We faithfully eat our Holy Communion and genuinely pay our zakat | B |
Oh our nation with these all where are we at | B |
Masses against the Leaders better called rulers and leaders against the masses | F |
Will it by one day end our national crises | G |
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This is nothing but our nation s ordeal | C |
Black cabals and foreign mafias usurping our national cake | D |
Is the Arms deal not a shady deal | C |
Deceiving the masses to be so real not knowing they were partly fake | D |
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From my Not A Country Not A Home to A Man From A Sperm | H |
This nation is still battling for fertilization from a weak and watery sperm | H |
From A Thin Line to my poem Mines Miles | I |
Yet to the less privilege not yet a face filled with genuine smiles | I |
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This is nothing but our nation s ordeal | C |
Black cabals and foreign mafias usurping our national cake | D |
Are Anti Corruption Wars and Change mantra not a shady deal | C |
Deceiving the masses to be so real not knowing they were partly fake | D |
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Silently in my prayer I say | J |
Our Nation s glory shall one day as giant of Africa be restored | B |
United Nations and Africa Union shall one day have peace and unity totally installed | B |
Our plenteous land flowing with milk and honey shall one day favour the masses table | E |
When would one day come I yell in deep breath as I drop my poetic pen with my mind partly unstable | E |
Fatoki, Oluwatobi O.
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