The Disk Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABC DEFG HCIJ KKLL CCMN OPQQI vividly remember that day | A |
When before me you bossily lay | A |
a malicious lion less life | B |
A flattened thin disk labelled future | C |
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I'm the candidate number one | D |
I thought I told you before I came on | E |
Why didn't you hear this first | F |
I've a reputation that I boast | G |
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Your first impression wasn't fair | H |
I thought you were a member | C |
You reduced me to one inch | I |
And dumped me in the dark ditch | J |
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For three hours you watched me | K |
You intentionally refused to rescue me | K |
quietly you let me spit false on everything | L |
Yet you knew the true form of each thing | L |
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As I stood to hand you to your creator | C |
You knew well I wasn't in order | C |
Yet you strongly upheld your hatred | M |
And made sure you see my star dead | N |
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It took you only three hours | O |
To turn my long built future a mess | P |
You are not the only ladder at least | Q |
I will be celebrated in a different feast | Q |
Didier Mamai
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/26/2021
Poet's note: Candidate 001!
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