Why My Love? Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDDEFD GADH IJDKA LMND A DOGDEPDA QDRSTDODD DUDVE WDXE

PART IA
I use to notice how flowers bloomB
You use to see the beauty in everythingC
but then you broke meD
I use to be the life of the partyD
I was the biggest cheerer of loveE
I use to believe everything was possibleF
until you broke meD
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There is no such time to tame the monsterG
So I asked whyA
For my love trust has been wiped away like the waves of the seaD
It seems to me like a dream but the reality is soH
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You left scars on my heartI
You shattered my dreamsJ
And made my bright days gloomyD
We hustle together for our future days to payK
But you left me so I asked whyA
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I was always there when you needed me I was swift to say sorry and fix thingsL
Loved you more than lifeM
I was there for you even when you couldn't be there for yourselfN
But still you broke meD
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PART IIA
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Lonely you left meD
Even though I love youO
When I recall days spent togetherG
Tears fall uncontrollablyD
So I asked why my loveE
My heart bleeds for the pain can't be laid offP
You were my hope but you broke meD
So I sit in my lonely world and cryA
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Before thoughts made me believe it was my faultQ
Perhaps I wasn't good enough but slowly it dawned on me that it couldn't beD
I did all I couldR
Did better than my bestS
I starved to keep in shapeT
Lend you moneyD
I am the smartest for youO
Magnificence was not even a worryD
I was your perfect partner why did you leave meD
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No one else because you were my ecstasyD
So I fail to control my tearsU
Moments shared have become the mystery of miseryD
Your enigma nonetheless remains my nightmareV
So I just asked why my loveE
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I burnt down my prideW
I put myself in an uncomfortable situation yet you broke meD
And now you are back saying you want me backX
So I look into your eyes and all I could say is why my loveE

Borklo Solomon
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/20/2023

Poet's note: This write-up was informed by today's relationship wahala




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