Why My Love? Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDDEFD GADH IJDKA LMND A DOGDEPDA QDRSTDODD DUDVE WDXE| PART I | A |
| I use to notice how flowers bloom | B |
| You use to see the beauty in everything | C |
| but then you broke me | D |
| I use to be the life of the party | D |
| I was the biggest cheerer of love | E |
| I use to believe everything was possible | F |
| until you broke me | D |
| - | |
| There is no such time to tame the monster | G |
| So I asked why | A |
| For my love trust has been wiped away like the waves of the sea | D |
| It seems to me like a dream but the reality is so | H |
| - | |
| You left scars on my heart | I |
| You shattered my dreams | J |
| And made my bright days gloomy | D |
| We hustle together for our future days to pay | K |
| But you left me so I asked why | A |
| - | |
| I was always there when you needed me I was swift to say sorry and fix things | L |
| Loved you more than life | M |
| I was there for you even when you couldn't be there for yourself | N |
| But still you broke me | D |
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| PART II | A |
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| Lonely you left me | D |
| Even though I love you | O |
| When I recall days spent together | G |
| Tears fall uncontrollably | D |
| So I asked why my love | E |
| My heart bleeds for the pain can't be laid off | P |
| You were my hope but you broke me | D |
| So I sit in my lonely world and cry | A |
| - | |
| Before thoughts made me believe it was my fault | Q |
| Perhaps I wasn't good enough but slowly it dawned on me that it couldn't be | D |
| I did all I could | R |
| Did better than my best | S |
| I starved to keep in shape | T |
| Lend you money | D |
| I am the smartest for you | O |
| Magnificence was not even a worry | D |
| I was your perfect partner why did you leave me | D |
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| No one else because you were my ecstasy | D |
| So I fail to control my tears | U |
| Moments shared have become the mystery of misery | D |
| Your enigma nonetheless remains my nightmare | V |
| So I just asked why my love | E |
| - | |
| I burnt down my pride | W |
| I put myself in an uncomfortable situation yet you broke me | D |
| And now you are back saying you want me back | X |
| So I look into your eyes and all I could say is why my love | E |
Borklo Solomon
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/20/2023
Poet's note: This write-up was informed by today's relationship wahala
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