Till When? Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFGHD CIJI KLDDI EDMNM EOEPO DEQEE| To the hills l lifted my eyes in awe for where cometh my help | A |
| As the ticking clock turns days into weeks weeks into months and even months into years | B |
| My heart flipped and flapped in anxiety for the hope of better days that never come | C |
| So I asked every day till when | D |
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| Life's iron hands keep crushing me like the metate | E |
| Till when will this chilly weather keep hunting my feeling | F |
| For I'm a dreamer with unstoppable hope with something to believe | G |
| But this world turns me upside down like a swinging ball | H |
| So I wait and asked when | D |
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| I ascend to realms above the mundane with words of wisdom | C |
| Making emotions flow like a river to places the weaver | I |
| Till when will our hearts be toyed with as we come clean | J |
| In lieu I present my till when to the maker | I |
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| Time keeps passing by like a running stream | K |
| Life is still on its journey and never ending it seems | L |
| But here I am keep asking myself Till when | D |
| Till When | D |
| Will the truth remain hidden from us forever | I |
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| Till when will my endless patience end | E |
| Till When | D |
| My dreams and hopes keep vanishing without a trace | M |
| And the assurance of love no more in my life at a glance | N |
| Will I have to continue dueling in this place | M |
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| Even the uncertainty chills me like an arctic wind | E |
| While my heart continues its jovial spin | O |
| Is it too much to ask for one final kind | E |
| I'm completely lost in thoughts | P |
| And confusion and doubt are starting to creep within | O |
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| Till When Till when | D |
| Must I continue to fake the smiles each night | E |
| And put on masks instead of polite fights | Q |
| The feeling we share is gradually fading out of sight | E |
| Till when do I need to hold myself so tight | E |
Borklo Solomon
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/23/2023
Poet's note: Brown Sketchy put me on this one and is about life and our expectations
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