The-broken-wings Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FGHBIJKJLM NOPQRSTUVWXBYJZBBBShould I say I know about your pains | A |
Will you admit and be true to yourself if not me | B |
Or you prefer to say it s fine and wallow in misery all alone | C |
I heard the wise men say problems shared are half solved | D |
But with you it s different | E |
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So many times I tried to talk and untie you from the burden | F |
Yet you tie you down with another lie | G |
What can I do to make you see that I am here to take the misery and self regrets guilt away | H |
How do I make you see that I have tasted this bitter cup so long and it isn t cool for any | B |
Countless times I ve sat you down to let you know also about my struggles | I |
And how I fail more than I am succeeding | J |
How my errors if weigh will beat down my right | K |
Can t you see my fight between body and soul by my living | J |
Still yet I am not ready to give up until it ends | L |
I wish you do same too | M |
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It hurts to see you off track but you seem not to care | N |
It hurts more that I bore the message of the one from grace to grass | O |
And how I watched mama cried tears that sent me in wonders | P |
But it s all coming clear because things have fallen apart | Q |
What be of her seedlings Lord if you remain mute | R |
I don t see any of the victims surviving this without your aid | S |
I believe it s only you that knows our internal struggles can heal | T |
Only you that see our imperfection where others see perfection can save | U |
Only you who knows when men do us wrong can deliver | V |
I believe only you oh Lord who has seen ahead can direct our ways | W |
Only you who knows the reason for a fragile heart like mine | X |
Can testify that without it which make men see but a weakling in me | B |
I will be a beast heartless and with no more human feelings | Y |
I embrace this gift with thanks giving | J |
Let your voice echo once again and awaken the closed gates | Z |
Mercy | B |
Mercy | B |
Mercy | B |
Tim Justin
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