The-broken-wings Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FGHBIJKJLM NOPQRSTUVWXBYJZBBB

Should I say I know about your painsA
Will you admit and be true to yourself if not meB
Or you prefer to say it s fine and wallow in misery all aloneC
I heard the wise men say problems shared are half solvedD
But with you it s differentE
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So many times I tried to talk and untie you from the burdenF
Yet you tie you down with another lieG
What can I do to make you see that I am here to take the misery and self regrets guilt awayH
How do I make you see that I have tasted this bitter cup so long and it isn t cool for anyB
Countless times I ve sat you down to let you know also about my strugglesI
And how I fail more than I am succeedingJ
How my errors if weigh will beat down my rightK
Can t you see my fight between body and soul by my livingJ
Still yet I am not ready to give up until it endsL
I wish you do same tooM
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It hurts to see you off track but you seem not to careN
It hurts more that I bore the message of the one from grace to grassO
And how I watched mama cried tears that sent me in wondersP
But it s all coming clear because things have fallen apartQ
What be of her seedlings Lord if you remain muteR
I don t see any of the victims surviving this without your aidS
I believe it s only you that knows our internal struggles can healT
Only you that see our imperfection where others see perfection can saveU
Only you who knows when men do us wrong can deliverV
I believe only you oh Lord who has seen ahead can direct our waysW
Only you who knows the reason for a fragile heart like mineX
Can testify that without it which make men see but a weakling in meB
I will be a beast heartless and with no more human feelingsY
I embrace this gift with thanks givingJ
Let your voice echo once again and awaken the closed gatesZ
MercyB
MercyB
MercyB

Tim Justin
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/02/2021



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