Daddy When You Wanna Be Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAC DDCE FGC CHHI IJKL| I was doing just fine without you | A |
| I didn't need to reunite | B |
| Didn't need anything from you | A |
| You already proved you weren't the man I needed you to be | C |
| - | |
| Yeah I'll go to this visitation | D |
| Sit down and give you a little conversation | D |
| But you don't mean much to me | C |
| No bond can ever be restored | E |
| - | |
| You did this when you chose not to be a dad | F |
| But I'm supposed to feel bad show pity and cater to you and your needs | G |
| But where was this when it was me | C |
| - | |
| You're just a daddy when you wanna be | C |
| I've accepted it | H |
| Stop stressing it | H |
| Do you and just leave me alone | I |
| - | |
| I'd rather walk down the aisle alone | I |
| Then with you or anyone else | J |
| Because you don't care you just sit there | K |
| And wonder why things are the way that they are | L |
Taliyah Edwards
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/02/2025
Poet's note: This poem is about that father figure who is supposed to be there but isn't, and constantly hurts you, and thinks returning will fix everything. And I wrote it October 1st 2025.
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