Sorry! I Couldn't Hear You Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBCC ADEBB AFFBB ABGGG AAAHI

Sorry I couldn't hear youA
When you're screaming from inside desperatelyB
Though showing you're enjoying lavishlyB
Revealing your happy sideC
But veiled your saddest sideC
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Sorry I couldn't hear youA
Shouting loudly dwelling in the problemsD
And never cared for own tormentsE
You're losing yourself very badlyB
And were ignored persistentlyB
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Sorry I couldn't hear youA
Being in stress and depressionF
Due to failure and deceptionF
Bawling so hardly and deeplyB
You were drowning in the sorrow constantlyB
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Sorry I couldn't hear youA
You're all alone in your arduous journeyB
Bellowing infront of others for aidingG
Despite of that you're haulingG
To make yourself shiningG
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Sorry I couldn't hear youA
It would have been better if I listened to youA
You wouldn't have let yourself brewA
But I wish you'll be healed by timeH
'Cause you're going to live only your lifeI

Subha Laxmi Moharana

Poet's note: This poem is 'bout the regret that we aren't listening to our inner self and always focus on other's happiness and self introspection isn't in our hands . But we have to listen to inner self!!




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