Supreme Commander Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFGE HIDJ DDDK GLMD| King father once said | A |
| I will not sit in my palace | B |
| Orders send you in frontline | C |
| I will lead you in battlefield to fight | D |
| - | |
| King said I will never rule you as a king | E |
| I will protect you as a parents | F |
| Care you as a brothers serve you as a son | G |
| I shall give you everything keep nothing | E |
| - | |
| We aren't blessed enough to see Dhramakaya | H |
| And Sambhogakaya Buddha | I |
| However our merits are not exhusted | D |
| To see Nirmanakaya Buddha in the form of our kings | J |
| - | |
| Supreme commander is never off duty | D |
| Whether sunny or rainy | D |
| He patrols the length breadth of the country | D |
| To protect us from the enemy in the bush | K |
| - | |
| Our kings is our religion | G |
| Lets us practice deligently | L |
| Our king is our god father | M |
| Let us follow what he preached | D |
Norbu Dorji
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