A Poem To God - Suicide Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABC DDEF GHIJ KKLL LMLL AAAA NNOO DDPP QR S AATTU C| Oh Lord I wanna commit suicide | A |
| Would you care if I died | A |
| I've got a gun on one hand | B |
| Pulling the trigger would mark my end | C |
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| A rope on the other I could hang myself and wake up in eternity | D |
| My reasons for choosing death are close to infinity | D |
| What about a bottle of rat poison under my bed | E |
| It would slowly take my life away would that make you sad | F |
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| Jump off a cliff fall from high above and crash to death | G |
| I just wanna vanish from this earth | H |
| I wouldn't want to break every bone in my body and live | I |
| I'm tired of what life has to give | J |
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| I've made up my mind I want to die | K |
| Would you care if I die | K |
| Am I doing it for someone | L |
| Hell no they ruined my life but I've many reasons besides that one | L |
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| And if I do it for them they would have won | L |
| Am not doing it for someone I made this choice on my own | M |
| I've tried every solution | L |
| But this is the last option | L |
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| I've tried my best I swear I tried | A |
| I want people to remember that I tried my best before I died | A |
| We will take care of you they lied | A |
| Oh Lord would you let me swallow my pride | A |
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| My demons are tormenting me should I give in | N |
| We are living in a world I can't survive in | N |
| Should I go all Middle East and use a suicide vest | O |
| This would hurt my family and friends but I swear I tried my best | O |
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| Instead of a suicide vest a bullet straight through my head will do for me | D |
| I wouldn't want innocent people to go down with me | D |
| That wouldn't be fair | P |
| Oh Lord if I die would you care | P |
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| This miserable life of mine has tested me to the limit | Q |
| Will you allow me to commit it | R |
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| WRITTEN BY SAMAL | S |
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| Lord am so glad that you didn't let me commit suicide | A |
| I'm so grateful that you cared and found me every time I tried | A |
| I would have missed out on so much watching my daughter Tamia grow up | T |
| Everytime I tried to commit suicide you showed up | T |
| I'm so glad you did | U |
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| THE END | C |
Mthandazo Mkhwananzi
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