The Last Evening Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FGAAA GGADH IJHKL MGNGG| The last evening I spent with Heather I felt lost and uneasy | A |
| Something was weighing on my mind but I said nothing about it | B |
| I looked into her eyes and I did not understand what I saw | C |
| She easily sensed my uneasiness and asked me what was wrong | D |
| And she knew that I lied when I said Nothing I m okay | E |
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| She never told me that she loved me but I felt her love | F |
| Even though I wanted to hear those words from her | G |
| My pride would not let me ask her about her feelings for me | A |
| Wherever she was that was where I wanted to be | A |
| Her comforting arms and her kisses were good enough for me | A |
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| We went against the traditional rules but it did not matter | G |
| I had never found happiness with any woman except Heather | G |
| And neither had she ever been happy with any man except me | A |
| So we decided what was right and what was wrong | D |
| We made our own rules of love but destiny had a plan for us | H |
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| I had a strange feeling when I left her house that evening | I |
| But I did not know that I would never see her again | J |
| I thought someday we would work things out between us | H |
| Moreover I believed that our love could stand the test of time | K |
| To break up with her on the phone was not what I wanted | L |
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| Oh how I wished she had eternal love in her heart | M |
| The ardency of my love alone could not keep us together | G |
| In the night our heaven mysteriously disappeared | N |
| Destiny took her from me but it couldn t take away my love for her | G |
| I loved her then I love her now and I will go on loving her | G |
Marlon Pitter
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