I Wouldn't Feel So Lonely Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFA AGHBAIJ KILMIBN OHPHHQRShe s just as attractive as she was when I met her a few years ago | A |
My heart is still feeling the after effect from the last time she came up to me | B |
Now I have the privilege of being in her company once again | C |
The owls are hooting and the crickets are singing a melodious tune | D |
The bright moonlight exposes the want for love in my eyes | E |
She s sitting on a step of stone by the roadway mooching and socializing with friends | F |
I m standing right beside her and she looks at me and tells me hello | A |
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She doesn t know that I want her to tell me more than just hello | A |
But a warm greeting from her may be the closest to her that I ll get | G |
What can I do to increase the likelihood of her realising that I love her | H |
I can t come out with the words boldly in front of everybody | B |
And so I ll just continue to admire her beauty from head to toe | A |
Her grin her sound her body movement everything she does captures my attention | I |
Why do the starry night and the enchantment have to end | J |
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I want to stay out here in the cold air and look at her lustfully all night | K |
But that s unrealistic thinking and it s not likely to happen | I |
In a few minutes from now she ll say I m going home I ll see you in the morning | L |
And then I ll smile and try to hide the unhappy look on my face | M |
She was a pretty girl at the age of sixteen and now she s a woman | I |
How could I tell her that I want to marry her when her aunt loves me | B |
I wish she could see my thoughts before she starts to walk up the steep stony road | N |
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I look forward to see her when I visit the mountainous exurb where she lives | O |
She fascinates me with her loveliness every time I hang out with her | H |
But my heart gets no gratification when I m at home and she s so far away | P |
If I can t take her with me to the lights of the city I d like to stay here with her | H |
I hate to leave in less than a week without getting her contact number | H |
For I know I wouldn t feel so lonely if I can talk to her on the phone | Q |
Unfortunately she s ready to go before I build up the courage to ask for her love | R |
Marlon Pitter
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