I'm Still Blue Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBBB CBDEB FGBBB HIJBB

Darling you knew that I was going to ask you to marry meA
Warmth gleamed in your eyes when the night wind blewB
I honestly told you how strong my love for you grewB
You turned your head towards me and said I love you tooB
Why did you pain my love struck heart and make me blueB
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I willingly did things for you I even buckled your shoesC
Darling you wouldn't believe how much I miss youB
I'm still blue after being without you for so many yearsD
Though I've cried more times than I can rememberE
I just can't subdue the deep feelings in my heart for youB
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I used to stand behind you and hold you around the waistF
We'd spend many hours talking in your cosy bedroomG
And we'd walk together when the grass was sprinkled with dewB
Now I don't see the inner city lady that I once knewB
Your friend told you that I still loved you darling it's trueB
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I fell silent for a while and you asked me Are you okayH
I answered yes and then you asked me Are you sureI
And you gave me a beautiful smile when I said yesJ
You were so enthusiastic about the portrait of you that I drewB
I'll always be blue because you're not here to see me throughB

Marlon Pitter
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/02/2021



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