I Felt Closer To Her Than I'd Ever Felt Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDE FGFCCF CHIJKL MNCCOP FOQCRS TCFSUV| Dinda's mom took me to visit her on a windy afternoon | A |
| She was lying there on her back looking so lifeless | B |
| I quickly walked over to her bedside and looked at her | C |
| And I pressed my knees hard against the mattress | B |
| Her faint voice and sad look brought tears to my eyes | D |
| At that moment I felt closer to her than I d ever felt | E |
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| She slowly reached for my hand and held it tightly | F |
| And it felt as if she wasn t going to let me go | G |
| The scars from her injury didn t affect her beauty | F |
| She had the same charm and I was still attracted to her | C |
| She admitted privately to knowing that I still loved her | C |
| I visited her many times and we developed an intimacy | F |
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| My preoccupation with Dinda began seven years earlier | C |
| I fell in love with her the night I saw at the meeting | H |
| And I proposed to her one year after we met | I |
| I wanted so much to marry her and make her mine | J |
| But she didn t have enough feelings for me then | K |
| And I had to go on living my life with a crushed heart | L |
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| Dinda was seriously injured by a stray bullet on the road | M |
| I had a break down when I heard about the incident | N |
| I felt that my chance to have her was gone forever | C |
| But God saved her life with his miraculous power | C |
| My heart rejoiced when I found out she was alive | O |
| The situation made our intimacy grow as time wore on | P |
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| I stood by her through the phases of her recovery | F |
| Furthermore I gave her a good reason to want to live | O |
| I pampered her until she was strong enough to walk | Q |
| She loved me and I still had the same affection for her | C |
| Although she knew I was married she gave me her lips | R |
| We thought it could work without hurting someone | S |
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| I never felt that I did more for her than she deserved | T |
| She was the girl I loved and I waited a long time for her | C |
| Yet I walked out on her when she fell in love with me | F |
| She misjudged me and reacted resentfully to my decision | S |
| That unfortunate outcome was far from what I wanted | U |
| If I get the opportunity to get close to her again I d do it | V |
Marlon Pitter
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