Another Dream About Yu-lin Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCB BDEF GHGI JKHL MNFO

In a sound sleep I found myself standing beside Yu LinA
For a few moments she and I were looking at each other fixedlyB
Though she was a grown woman she didn t appear to ageC
Her face had the appearance of a teenage girlB
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I couldn t believe that it was really her for it was improbableB
She had been completely avoiding me since we broke upD
I wanted to see her but I had a bad feeling about itE
Guilty feelings came over me and I was filled with apprehensionF
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I was trying to find a way to apologise but I couldn tG
She sat there in silence with a pleasant look on her faceH
I said What can I say to make you believe that I m truly sorryG
She showed no sign of anger but she didn t respondI
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Her smile looked the same as it was many years agoJ
I said Though we parted the strength of my love has kept me goingK
She swiftly moved closer to me like a dominatrixH
And then she said something that I couldn t fully make outL
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I was wondering what she intended to do nextM
She hugged me the same awkward way she used to doN
And then she kissed me with intense passionF
In the heat of kissing I awoke and realised that it was a dreamO

Marlon Pitter
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 07/09/2025



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