As It Begins With A Brush Stroke On A Snare Drum Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEF GH IJDKLM NOPQRS TU VBWXYG ZA2HB2C2D2 E2IF2G2H2V I2J2GK2V L2C2M2N2O2H P2Q2R2Q2Q2C2 S2T2U2HJ2V2 W2X2C2Y2Q2Y Q2Z2A3Z2R2Q2 C2P2B3Q2J2Z2 C3Q2Z2 Z2Q2Z2VVVD3R2Q2 R2J2E2Z2Q2V Z2VZ2Q2Q2Z2 Z2Q2P2Z2Q2Q2 BMH2E3VQ2 Z2Q2Q2A3I2Z2 VMQ2Q2Q2J2 Q2Q2F3MQ2Z2 MB3R2Z2Z2Z2 A2Q2G3VH3V I3J2Q2V J3 Q2Q2R2VVQ2 Z2C2K3L3Z2Z2 R2Q2Z2R2I2W2 M3

The plaza was so still in that moment two years ago thatA
everything was clearB
As if it had been preserved beneath a kind of lacqueredC
stillness for a whileD
I did not even notice the pigeons lifting above the sad tilesE
of churchesF
-
Or how they must have sounded like applause that is notG
meant for anyoneH
-
I must not have noticed that blind woman on the corner whoI
begged coinsJ
For a living who had one eye swelled shut entirely whileD
the other a thin filmK
Of glaucoma over it that had taken on the lustreless sheenL
of a nickelM
-
Was held wide open to witness spittle on the curb And soonN
the bandO
In their sun bleached military uniforms were tuning up beneathP
the blossom of rustQ
Covering the gazebo its eaves festooned with the off whiteR
spiderwebs of unlit Christmas lightsS
-
And that girl Socorro her smile surfacing voluptuously asT
an unspoken thoughtU
-
Again was selling gardenias their petals already beginningV
to appearB
Faintly discolored around the edges from a basket she carriedW
on her headX
In an unwobbling stillness Martin was selling chicklets butY
no one boughtG
-
Chicklets anymore no one bought the little squawking birdsZ
or the cheap stoneA2
Animals turned out on a lathe in Veracruz either no oneH
wanted his shoes shinedB2
By then the band was playing show tunes from My Fair LadyC2
South Pacific wasD2
-
Interrupted only once because of a routine demonstration byE2
the Communists whoI
Mostly were demonstrating because it was Sunday becauseF2
that is what they didG2
On Sundays After a while I started walking vaguely awayH2
beside some fading stoneworkV
-
Which in fact is not called Our Lady of Perfect Solitude norI2
even Our SisterJ2
Of Perpetual Solitude but simply Santo Domingo I do notG
know why I walked near it thenK2
passed without enteringV
-
-
-
Still in the painting the children kept skating the othersL2
are probablyC2
Walking home from school at this moment in their yellowM2
raincoats withN2
The stale smells left on wax paper locked in their lunch pailsO2
That womanH
-
Keeps brushing her hair so somewhere it is stillP2
the riot policeQ2
Are spilling Out of their buses On the marsh above theR2
Sound there were egretsQ2
There were black swans nesting in the rushes the canal wasQ2
warm saltyC2
-
There was a cabin filling with so much moonlight I almostS2
believed I couldT2
Dissolve in it if I sat very still I sat very still I watchedU2
my sonH
Skating at the edge of a pond in his sleep It was summerJ2
by the timeV2
-
I finally saw the painting in Brussels counted each one ofW2
the children as ifX2
To make sure they were still there then graduallyC2
lost count in the dreamY2
Of the plowman on the hill there must have been the faceQ2
of an English poetY
-
Looking as lined as a maple leaf pressed between the pagesQ2
of a book Beneath itZ2
The Danube is gliding I am just holding his book nowA3
not even needing to read itZ2
Anymore as I cross into the frontier green wheat alfalfa aR2
feeling of distanceQ2
-
In it all like sleep or rain reclaiming some lost rural MissouriC2
slum town untilP2
It no longer exists now the Hungarian checkpoint whereB3
guards with starsQ2
The shade of American lipstick on their caps will enterJ2
seem proud of the unchippedZ2
-
Deep blue enamel on their machine guns Most of them areC3
just poor teen agersQ2
From the surrounding villages farms innocentZ2
-
The only glamour that is leftZ2
On the Orient ExpressQ2
Is a soiled torn doily on an armrestZ2
Rhyme then rhyme dream but in the other paintingV
which is not a paintingV
They are trudging home from school in the rain which is likeV
a kind of sleepD3
When one of them thinks the mind is not the mind in theR2
unbewitched meticulousQ2
-
First shaping of numbers on a blackboard it is only theR2
shadow of a skater overJ2
A white pond There is a sea beyond it roughened byE2
whitecaps the mindZ2
Moves first one way then another then both ways at onceQ2
then one longV
-
Glide past the pines that look black from this far away butZ2
aren't blackV
The boy's friend is saying he 'hates school but only sortZ2
of ' But the child'sQ2
Not listening he is thinking that something he painted wasQ2
something he dreamtZ2
-
And then some of the dream got mixed in with the paintZ2
then with recessQ2
The afternoon this long walk in the rain now he willP2
never get it sortedZ2
Out In the story the boy falling must have thought hisQ2
father had wingsQ2
-
Unlike his own real That is why the myth is so clearB
so cruelM
And why we survive it Yellow rain gear Black woods GrayH2
sky HomeE3
Is where you can forget some things the boy is thinkingV
because he isQ2
-
Tired from having to walk for so long because he has leftZ2
his galoshesQ2
At school his shoes are wet as he unthinkingly turns hisQ2
back to me nowA3
Goes up the worn slick steps of a front porch the doorI2
closes AndZ2
-
Because I am not allowed to see it there is a glass of milkV
on the tableM
The stairs behind it are dark from a narrow upstairsQ2
window there isQ2
A glimpse of the sea later in his dream there is sometimesQ2
a fatherJ2
-
And then it is more like a story about a father then it isQ2
the hush of iceQ2
Over a pond's surface In spring when it begins to thawF3
there is a littleM
Noise underneath it like steel sighing if steel could sigh asQ2
it seems toZ2
-
Sometimes when you are walking home alone on a trestleM
above a river thereB3
Is a broken pattern of geese above it a vee decomposing aR2
sky mottled with blueZ2
And some clouds It is like a father dissolving setting youZ2
free whatZ2
-
Has the father ever achieved that will outlast his ownA2
vanishing And soQ2
The boy spits over the raillng watches the silvery webG3
of it fallingV
And thinning until it is gossamer a filament untying itselfH3
forever sayingV
-
Exactly what forever always meant to say that this long pullI3
of spring tide in the riverJ2
Needs nothing nothing except its one momentary witnessQ2
a boy pausingV
-
Above it all on a bridgeJ3
-
In Oaxaca after the bomb went off there were neverthelessQ2
a few secondsQ2
A pure stillness in which I could hear the fountain in theR2
plaza distant trafficV
The sudden silence of birds Then everyone was rushingV
through the streetsQ2
-
Toward a place where sound had been a place that wasn'tZ2
there It is funnyC2
But the sound of a bomb a few seconds after it has goneK3
off is no longer evenL3
Surprising In a little while it seems only right sad I satZ2
in the balcony of a restaurantZ2
-
Overlooking it all read a poem by Alberto Blanco in theR2
magazine edited by PazQ2
And waited for the place to open in the next hour watchedZ2
the plazaR2
Gradually fill with the usual crowds those who love orI2
those who think they loveW2
-
Novelty changeM3

Larry Levis



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