The Maid Of Naaman's Wife Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLMGNOPI QRS TUVTWGXYZGLGA2B2C2D2 CGE2FCF2TE2GGG2H2CGH 2HLLCCCI2GC2LH2MH2J2 GK2L2M2GL H2H2H2CH2H2CH2CH2CCH 2N2O2GH2P2H2LQ2CH2H2 K2CR2S2 H2T2J2GH2GH2U2H2V2GR 2LJ2H2CJ2W2X2CH2GGGC CQ2U2CCH2CY2CH2H2OZ2 H2H2A3GJ2CCZ2H2Z2B3J 2 GLH2J2GCGGH2H2CC3G GJ2GGCH2GGLCGGH2LGGH 2GThat was the proud woman Naaman's wife | A |
Basking at noon under the Syrian fans | B |
While Naaman the leprous mighty captain | C |
Proud glowing flesh now silver skinned and tainted | D |
Walked in contagion here and there apart | E |
His wife the unblemished Naaman in her mind | F |
The man who coming with the spoils and shouts | G |
Had made a hundred triumphs hers when all | H |
The Syrian women courted her for that | I |
Now saw in the pestilent limbs shame and reproach | J |
Some treachery that made her who was mate | K |
Of Syria's pride bondwoman of a leper | L |
She must nurse her blame since he was Naaman still | M |
With an old honour paid by stedfastness | G |
The mark of Syria's compassion Black | N |
Thoughts were her only payment for betrayal | O |
But in secret she could play them without pity | P |
Let the fans beat they could not beguile her from that | I |
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And Naaman had loved her but not now | Q |
Knowing the uses that his love had been | R |
How given for her to squander it in pride | S |
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Syria out of Israel had brought | T |
Captives and among them one a maid | U |
A little maid just troubled with the touch | V |
Of womanhood upon her body and thought | T |
And she served Naaman's wife a lonely girl | W |
To answer bidding and covet little tones | G |
Of kindness that she heard go to and fro | X |
But not for her She trembled as she stood | Y |
At the proud woman's couch because a fault | Z |
In orders done meant scolding and even rods | G |
And she had but two joys One to remember | L |
A Galilean town and the blue waters | G |
That washed the pebbles that she knew so well | A2 |
Yellow in sunlight or frozen in the moon | B2 |
A little curve of beach where she would walk | C2 |
At any hour with an old silver man | D2 |
Her father's father her sole companion | C |
Who told her tales of Moses and the prophets | G |
That lived in the old days And of that time | E2 |
She had but now poor treasuries of the mind | F |
Little seclusions when the day's work done | C |
She made thought into prayer before she slept | F2 |
These and a faded gown that she had brought | T |
Into captivity patterned with sprigs of thyme | E2 |
And blades of wheat and little curling shells | G |
And signs of heaven figured out in stars | G |
Made by a weaver that her grandsire knew | G2 |
A gift on some thanksgiving She might not wear it | H2 |
Being suited as became a slave but often | C |
At night she would spread it in her loneliness | G |
And think how finely she too might be drest | H2 |
As finely as any proud woman of them all | H |
If the God of Israel had not visited her | L |
Surely for sin though she could not remember | L |
Thus one joy was And then the Lord Naaman | C |
This wonder soiled this pitiful great captain | C |
Forbidden all that he had so proudly been | C |
To worship him that was her other joy | I2 |
When the dusk came and the city fell to silence | G |
And out of his poor banishment he would walk | C2 |
She followed him knowing the very hour | L |
And all her heart was flooded through with pity | H2 |
Because she knew the leprosy left still | M |
A Naaman untainted and lovely | H2 |
Then in her mind was the proud woman a loathing | J2 |
Who dared to waste a marvel such as this | G |
The right in the world's knowledge so to love | K2 |
O pitiful evil blasting so great a flesh | L2 |
Walling a spirit so governing itself | M2 |
In spite of desolation A maid's thought thus | G |
Knew how the frames of mastery can suffer | L |
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Sometimes at night when not even lepers walked | H2 |
Solitary in the Syrian meadows she | H2 |
Would wander in the old perplexity | H2 |
That the moon makes of love Never she knew | C |
Could any adoration that she brought | H2 |
Touch even the Lord Naaman's banishment | H2 |
The Naaman fallen from the time when even | C |
Great ladies dare not speak the thing they felt | H2 |
She was nothing or the world could never know | C |
If she was more than nothing a maid to bind | H2 |
Tresses for beauty that was not her own | C |
And yet she knew that she had beauty too | C |
A little hermit beauty that might spend | H2 |
Royally if it dare and a man would speak | N2 |
Royally Naaman but he could not hear | O2 |
But still for all the silence of her lips | G |
And heart with promise nothing known she loved | H2 |
Loved the sad leper walking in the dusk | P2 |
Loved the great lord loved even his leprosy | H2 |
Since by it he came a little down to her | L |
Loved him and knew that her love was the sum | Q2 |
Of all that loving and must be But even so | C |
She knew her love an honester thing than any | H2 |
That the proud woman had O moon she thought | H2 |
Could you not make me truly tell this love | K2 |
This love pulsing along my blood and brain | C |
As midnight surges going through the sky | R2 |
And long she pondered how she best might serve | S2 |
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Then one day when the fans moved and she stood | H2 |
Ministering with her perfumes at the couch | T2 |
Her mistress with eyes that meant the thought was nothing | J2 |
Said Is it not grievous that my lord goes thus | G |
And the maid felt the colour at her throat | H2 |
Flow round her neck and flood up to her temples | G |
But knowing feared not or put her fear aside | H2 |
And said Would God my lord were in Samaria | U2 |
To seek Elisha there a prophet lady | H2 |
Whom God hath taught to cure whom he will cure | V2 |
She spoke and the bright bowl trembled in her hands | G |
And fear because of her words made the tongue dry | R2 |
As the woman looked with still cold eyes upon her | L |
But the word passed from lip to lip and the king | J2 |
Heard it and sent for Naaman and said | H2 |
A girl among the slaves that you brought in | C |
From Israel has spoken a strange thing | J2 |
Of one Elisha a prophet whom they obey | W2 |
Saying that he could bid the blemish off | X2 |
That is cheating Syria of her proudest man | C |
Now therefore journey to him and I will send | H2 |
Word to Israel's king that he shall bless | G |
Favours from us in whom his fortune lies | G |
Bidding him call this prophet to your cause | G |
Go and the love of Syria go with you | C |
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Then Naaman with his servants went at dawn | C |
And Naaman's wife saw how again might come | Q2 |
Her mastery among the women of Syria | U2 |
Yet was the little maid her hatred now | C |
Lest of her word should come this resurrection | C |
And Naaman went and Israel's king was glad | H2 |
Because of Syria's favour and sent down | C |
The hill to where Elisha lived among | Y2 |
Farmers of flax and goatherds and a few | C |
Unhappy men who brought their sorrow to God | H2 |
Asking his mercy on the Syrian lord | H2 |
And Naaman stood before the prophet of Israel | O |
And told his grief And Elisha looked upon him | Z2 |
Measured his faith and bade him bathe his body | H2 |
Seven times in the river of Jordan and be | H2 |
Whole And Naaman questioned and was wrath | A3 |
As was not any river of Damascus | G |
Purer than Jordan and in more virtue flowing | J2 |
But little his servants said was this to do | C |
And as persuasion led him he went down | C |
And seven times let Jordan cover him | Z2 |
And came with a clean body as of old | H2 |
A strong man with the tides of blood before him | Z2 |
With equal limbs for all the spirit could dare | B3 |
And into Syria he sang upon his riding | J2 |
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And tidings came to the Syrian king of this | G |
Heralding a Naaman mightier than ever | L |
With clean flesh and a wisdom all matured | H2 |
And all the city rang upon his coming | J2 |
The king and his estate people and priests | G |
And soldiers glad of their old captain again | C |
And matrons with their girls and the rich merchants | G |
All shouted Naaman Naaman through the streets | G |
And Naaman's wife stood at the king's right hand | H2 |
Her slave borne canopy coloured and spangled | H2 |
While the great fans beat upon her pride again | C |
And Naaman in plumes and plate and mail | C3 |
Again was master of the Syrian hosts | G |
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Afar beyond the barriers of the streets | G |
Pressing among the crowd for a moment's seeing | J2 |
The Israelitish maid between her duties | G |
Watched with a proud flush beating down her limbs | G |
And shyly she had on a faded gown | C |
Patterned with sprigs of thyme and blades of wheat | H2 |
And paling stars and little curling shells | G |
And as the shouting rose she watched in silence | G |
With trembling lips and Naaman passed by her | L |
And her hands moved towards him and fell down | C |
Then stole upon her bosom as they would ease | G |
The aching beauty of her loneliness | G |
And there unnoted as he passed she stood | H2 |
With not a thought from all that world upon her | L |
Only when service came again she saw | G |
A glowing hatred in the proud woman's eyes | G |
And in the night she thought of it and wept | H2 |
But not for any hatred were her tears | G |
John Drinkwater
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