A Christmas Morning Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABACDEFGHEBAIJKLMNOP QERSTUTVWXYWTSWEZA2B 2OC2D2E2F2G2B2H2 I2J2K2I2L2M2N2O2EP2J Q2R2

One of my father's oldest storiesA
how when he was a boy growing upB
in that town there were no poniesA
Buggies were gone almost as soonC
as cars came in but farmers still keptD
a horse or two in the back pastureE
to help with the hay or for the kidsF
to ride around on Not ponies thoughG
There were agents from the coal minesH
who came through every summerE
driving the back roads buying upB
all the poniesA
They shipped themI
down to Terre Haute to PrincetonJ
towns in the western part of the stateK
where they were taken undergroundL
to drag the iron cars laden with coalM
Stabled in darkness hidden awayN
from the sun imprisoned thereO
forever or until they droppedP
in their tracks or so the story wentQ
the reason people said there wereE
no ponies in these partsR
That was beforeS
I came to understand how grown menT
still care about what they cannot changeU
how it sticks in their throats whenT
they try to tellV
Christmas morningW
I was already half a stranger homeX
from college We were sitting in a mazeY
of ribbons and wrapping paper talkingW
drinking warmed over coffee whenT
there was a knock at the back doorS
It was the barber Joe Slayton sayingW
he had something to show my fatherE
I should come tooZ
We slipped outA2
into a light snow fallen in the nightB2
and winter's brightness everywhereO
and drove along the empty streetsC2
to a house on the west side of townD2
where an old man led us down a pathE2
and into a barn When our eyes adjustedF2
we saw a brown pony with a long maneG2
wheeling through bars of narrow lightB2
let in by cracks between the boardsH2
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Sometimes it stopped to look backI2
through the shadows We could not seeJ2
its eyes but all that space was filledK2
with its hot breath its soft nickeringI2
Sometimes it pawed and moved offL2
to a place where its glance caughtM2
in a patch of light and we could see itN2
studying usO2
this silken creatureE
all our stories said was doomed to liveP2
beneath the ground and never see the sunJ
again that pranced before us nowQ2
and stamped its hooves against the earthR2

Jared Carter



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