A Christmas Morning Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABACDEFGHEBAIJKLMNOP QERSTUTVWXYWTSWEZA2B 2OC2D2E2F2G2B2H2 I2J2K2I2L2M2N2O2EP2J Q2R2One of my father's oldest stories | A |
how when he was a boy growing up | B |
in that town there were no ponies | A |
Buggies were gone almost as soon | C |
as cars came in but farmers still kept | D |
a horse or two in the back pasture | E |
to help with the hay or for the kids | F |
to ride around on Not ponies though | G |
There were agents from the coal mines | H |
who came through every summer | E |
driving the back roads buying up | B |
all the ponies | A |
They shipped them | I |
down to Terre Haute to Princeton | J |
towns in the western part of the state | K |
where they were taken underground | L |
to drag the iron cars laden with coal | M |
Stabled in darkness hidden away | N |
from the sun imprisoned there | O |
forever or until they dropped | P |
in their tracks or so the story went | Q |
the reason people said there were | E |
no ponies in these parts | R |
That was before | S |
I came to understand how grown men | T |
still care about what they cannot change | U |
how it sticks in their throats when | T |
they try to tell | V |
Christmas morning | W |
I was already half a stranger home | X |
from college We were sitting in a maze | Y |
of ribbons and wrapping paper talking | W |
drinking warmed over coffee when | T |
there was a knock at the back door | S |
It was the barber Joe Slayton saying | W |
he had something to show my father | E |
I should come too | Z |
We slipped out | A2 |
into a light snow fallen in the night | B2 |
and winter's brightness everywhere | O |
and drove along the empty streets | C2 |
to a house on the west side of town | D2 |
where an old man led us down a path | E2 |
and into a barn When our eyes adjusted | F2 |
we saw a brown pony with a long mane | G2 |
wheeling through bars of narrow light | B2 |
let in by cracks between the boards | H2 |
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Sometimes it stopped to look back | I2 |
through the shadows We could not see | J2 |
its eyes but all that space was filled | K2 |
with its hot breath its soft nickering | I2 |
Sometimes it pawed and moved off | L2 |
to a place where its glance caught | M2 |
in a patch of light and we could see it | N2 |
studying us | O2 |
this silken creature | E |
all our stories said was doomed to live | P2 |
beneath the ground and never see the sun | J |
again that pranced before us now | Q2 |
and stamped its hooves against the earth | R2 |
Jared Carter
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