Lines On His Twenty-third Birthday Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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LAST evening's huge lax clouds of turbid whiteA
Grew dark and louring burthened with the rainB
Which that long wind monotonous all nightA
Swept clashing loud through Dreamland's still domainB
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Until my spirit in fatigue's despiteA
Was driven to weary wakefulness againC
With such wild dirge and ceaseless streaming tearsD
Died out the last of all my ill used yearsE
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The morn his risen pure and fresh and keenF
Its perfect vault of bright blue heaven spreads bareG
Above the earth's wide laughter twinkling greenF
The sun long climbing up with lurid glareG
Athwart the storm rack's rent and hurrying screenF
Leapt forth at dawn to breathe this stainless airG
The strong west wind still streams on full and highH
Inspiring fresher life through earth and skyH
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Yon hazeless river flashes silver signsI
Of where it flows how delicate and clearJ
The distant hills curve far their grey blue linesI
Steadfast amidst the rushing atmosphereJ
With every blade distinct the green grass shinesI
Untouched by frost those old trees dark or sereJ
Swaying and soughing in the lifeful dawnK
Have every leaf and twig distinctly drawnK
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This day my own particular year has birthL
The general year is very old to dayM
Yet with what healthful life o'er heaven and earthL
The death bound monarch holdeth steadfast swayM
Not too austere for much of hearty mirthL
And energetic pleasure nor so greyM
But that he still can deck himself with flowersN
Would that like his could be my dying hoursN
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Still dew pearled fuchsias shine like pendent gemsO
While some lie purely on the deep dark mouldP
Beneath their glossy leaves and ruddy stemsO
The thick chrysanthemums range white and coldP
Of all its wealth of marvellous anademsO
That gleamed amidst their fruits of orange goldP
Glowing red hearted in the Autumn sunQ
The passion flower has still for me kept oneQ
I pace the garden in this genial mornR
And meditate the dirge of my dead yearJ
With even less of grief than sharp self scornR
The retrospect in truth brings little cheerJ
As if of one long tired who stares forlornR
Across flat marshland barren gloomy drearJ
Where fields nor home nor church his vision greetS
Which he has toiled through with unsteady feetS
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He turns before him as behind all roundT
The pathless waste outstretches flat and bareJ
From sullen pools amidst the dark heath groundT
Frogs jar their croakings through the murky airJ
Which up that vault of solid sky stone boundT
Heaves huge dense glooms to shut on his despairJ
Let him crawl on as he has crawled all dayM
Till Night comes down upon his homeless wayM
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My golden morning hours which should have broughtU
Strength wisdom faith and love or hope of allV
Have sunk and dribbled while I heeded notW
Into the slush of sloth beyond recallV
O nerveless hands brain of aimless thoughtU
O slow dim eyes that never marked their fallV
Absorbed in dreams both waking and asleepX
Our golden hours for ever lost now weepX
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All lost for ever and the hours to comeY
Poor refuse but our sole remaining wealthZ
So much the likelier thence to share doomA2
The brain unused to mark insidious stealthZ
Short sighted eyes long filled with mist and gloomA2
Lax hands uncustomed to the grasp of healthZ
That lost the fight in their best youth shall theseO
Victorious prove in languor and diseaseO
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Oh for the flushed excitement of keen strifeB2
For mountains gulfs and torrents in my wayM
With peril anguish fear and strugglings rifeB2
For friends and foes for love and hate in frayM
And not this lone base flat of torpid lifeB2
I fret 'neath gnat stings an ignoble preyM
While others with a sword hilt in their graspC2
Have warm rich blood to feed their latest gaspC2
Wrathful and dangerous restless free profoundT
With fair green islands shining o'er its vergeD2
The Sea of Life there heaves and roars aroundT
To pierce its depths to throb against its surgeD2
Breasting to gain the Happy Isles if drownedT
The loser pays he fought his game no dirgeD2
But to be whelmed in torpor at the lastE2
As one with this dead crag which holds me fastE2
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Flushed grapes full charged with life's delirious wineF2
Brush my wan temples hanging thick aboutG2
Chained fast I cannot reach them while I pineF2
To press their very inmost rapture outG2
Flooding with fire these dust dry lips of mineF2
Better wild drunkenness than hectic droughtG2
And torture breeds new tortures in the dreadH2
That ere they fall my power to drink be deadH2
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The prisoner loses other years than yearnI2
Within the lifeless dungeon crusht and pentJ2
Late freedom frees dead ashes from their urnI2
His torture has become his elementK2
This Bride of Life for whom I waiting burnI2
May grow a withered hag ere she relentJ2
Herself refused then or our worn out eldJ2
In bridal chimings have its funeral kneeledJ2
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O pure West wind strong life breath of the dayJ2
Inspire my wasted heart with strength and hopeL2
Sweep thou its grievous doubts and fears awayJ2
Who swept far scattering down the eastern slopeL2
The brooding rain clouds massed in dense arrayJ2
Till this green earth shone laughing to the copeL2
Of this pure heaven whose naked form austereJ
Yet genial glows with sunshine warm and clearJ
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I hope I feel that I can yet break freeJ
From this accursed cage wherein I pineF2
There comes a vision of the sounding seaJ
The all sustaining all intombing brineF2
Through want and peril wretchedness and gleeJ
Wrestling with lives more coarse and strong than mineF2
I yet may woo its love and dare its strifeB2
By self dependence earning careless lifeB2
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And so attaining strength The crazy shipM2
Frigate or bumboat slaver mission arkN2
Shall surely in the first squall heel and dipM2
The strong may hope to sail its voyage and markN2
What of the ends means issues of its tripM2
Knows holy vessel or Brazilian barqueN2
Through storm and calm it does its best to floatJ2
For what He knows who steers and rules the boatJ2
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So much more strength so much more life I sayJ2
So much more love and thought more soul and sense IH
We pare our members bit by bit awayJ2
Because they're damning us with foul offenceJ2
Cowards be strong and force them to obeyJ2
Is virtue but a eunuch's continenceJ2
Napoleon ev'n seems nobler than such saintJ2
As eighteen centuries have learned to paintJ2
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Thus Hope is born pale birth of grim DespairJ
Whether the Father Shall his child devourJ
Or this poor Babe maturing strong and fairJ
Shall dispossess the parent of his powerJ
I know not yet I think that I could dareJ
A death stern struggle with the fiercest hourJ
Would foolish Wisdom's whirls of dreary thoughtJ2
But leave my doubt vexed spirit undistraughtJ2
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Meanwhile then let me wait and hope and learnI2
To curb with galling steel and ruthless handJ2
These strong and passionate impulses that burnI2
To sweep me from my post of self commandJ2
Into the battle raging thick and sternI2
Into the desert's freedom vast and grandJ2
That horseman proves full strength firm skill indeedJ2
Who holdeth statue calm his savage steedJ2

James Thomson



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