Lines On His Twenty-third Birthday Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAB ACDE FGFGFGHH IJIJIJKK LMLMLMNN OPOPOPQQRJRJRJSS TJTJTJMM UVWVUVXX YZA2ZA2ZOO B2MB2MB2MC2C2TD2TD2T D2E2E2 F2G2F2G2F2G2H2H2 I2J2I2K2I2J2J2J2 J2L2J2L2J2L2JJ JF2JF2JF2B2B2 M2N2M2N2M2N2J2J2 J2HJ2J2J2J2J2J2 JJJJJJJ2J2 I2J2I2J2I2J2J2J2LAST evening's huge lax clouds of turbid white | A |
Grew dark and louring burthened with the rain | B |
Which that long wind monotonous all night | A |
Swept clashing loud through Dreamland's still domain | B |
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Until my spirit in fatigue's despite | A |
Was driven to weary wakefulness again | C |
With such wild dirge and ceaseless streaming tears | D |
Died out the last of all my ill used years | E |
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The morn his risen pure and fresh and keen | F |
Its perfect vault of bright blue heaven spreads bare | G |
Above the earth's wide laughter twinkling green | F |
The sun long climbing up with lurid glare | G |
Athwart the storm rack's rent and hurrying screen | F |
Leapt forth at dawn to breathe this stainless air | G |
The strong west wind still streams on full and high | H |
Inspiring fresher life through earth and sky | H |
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Yon hazeless river flashes silver signs | I |
Of where it flows how delicate and clear | J |
The distant hills curve far their grey blue lines | I |
Steadfast amidst the rushing atmosphere | J |
With every blade distinct the green grass shines | I |
Untouched by frost those old trees dark or sere | J |
Swaying and soughing in the lifeful dawn | K |
Have every leaf and twig distinctly drawn | K |
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This day my own particular year has birth | L |
The general year is very old to day | M |
Yet with what healthful life o'er heaven and earth | L |
The death bound monarch holdeth steadfast sway | M |
Not too austere for much of hearty mirth | L |
And energetic pleasure nor so grey | M |
But that he still can deck himself with flowers | N |
Would that like his could be my dying hours | N |
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Still dew pearled fuchsias shine like pendent gems | O |
While some lie purely on the deep dark mould | P |
Beneath their glossy leaves and ruddy stems | O |
The thick chrysanthemums range white and cold | P |
Of all its wealth of marvellous anadems | O |
That gleamed amidst their fruits of orange gold | P |
Glowing red hearted in the Autumn sun | Q |
The passion flower has still for me kept one | Q |
I pace the garden in this genial morn | R |
And meditate the dirge of my dead year | J |
With even less of grief than sharp self scorn | R |
The retrospect in truth brings little cheer | J |
As if of one long tired who stares forlorn | R |
Across flat marshland barren gloomy drear | J |
Where fields nor home nor church his vision greet | S |
Which he has toiled through with unsteady feet | S |
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He turns before him as behind all round | T |
The pathless waste outstretches flat and bare | J |
From sullen pools amidst the dark heath ground | T |
Frogs jar their croakings through the murky air | J |
Which up that vault of solid sky stone bound | T |
Heaves huge dense glooms to shut on his despair | J |
Let him crawl on as he has crawled all day | M |
Till Night comes down upon his homeless way | M |
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My golden morning hours which should have brought | U |
Strength wisdom faith and love or hope of all | V |
Have sunk and dribbled while I heeded not | W |
Into the slush of sloth beyond recall | V |
O nerveless hands brain of aimless thought | U |
O slow dim eyes that never marked their fall | V |
Absorbed in dreams both waking and asleep | X |
Our golden hours for ever lost now weep | X |
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All lost for ever and the hours to come | Y |
Poor refuse but our sole remaining wealth | Z |
So much the likelier thence to share doom | A2 |
The brain unused to mark insidious stealth | Z |
Short sighted eyes long filled with mist and gloom | A2 |
Lax hands uncustomed to the grasp of health | Z |
That lost the fight in their best youth shall these | O |
Victorious prove in languor and disease | O |
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Oh for the flushed excitement of keen strife | B2 |
For mountains gulfs and torrents in my way | M |
With peril anguish fear and strugglings rife | B2 |
For friends and foes for love and hate in fray | M |
And not this lone base flat of torpid life | B2 |
I fret 'neath gnat stings an ignoble prey | M |
While others with a sword hilt in their grasp | C2 |
Have warm rich blood to feed their latest gasp | C2 |
Wrathful and dangerous restless free profound | T |
With fair green islands shining o'er its verge | D2 |
The Sea of Life there heaves and roars around | T |
To pierce its depths to throb against its surge | D2 |
Breasting to gain the Happy Isles if drowned | T |
The loser pays he fought his game no dirge | D2 |
But to be whelmed in torpor at the last | E2 |
As one with this dead crag which holds me fast | E2 |
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Flushed grapes full charged with life's delirious wine | F2 |
Brush my wan temples hanging thick about | G2 |
Chained fast I cannot reach them while I pine | F2 |
To press their very inmost rapture out | G2 |
Flooding with fire these dust dry lips of mine | F2 |
Better wild drunkenness than hectic drought | G2 |
And torture breeds new tortures in the dread | H2 |
That ere they fall my power to drink be dead | H2 |
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The prisoner loses other years than yearn | I2 |
Within the lifeless dungeon crusht and pent | J2 |
Late freedom frees dead ashes from their urn | I2 |
His torture has become his element | K2 |
This Bride of Life for whom I waiting burn | I2 |
May grow a withered hag ere she relent | J2 |
Herself refused then or our worn out eld | J2 |
In bridal chimings have its funeral kneeled | J2 |
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O pure West wind strong life breath of the day | J2 |
Inspire my wasted heart with strength and hope | L2 |
Sweep thou its grievous doubts and fears away | J2 |
Who swept far scattering down the eastern slope | L2 |
The brooding rain clouds massed in dense array | J2 |
Till this green earth shone laughing to the cope | L2 |
Of this pure heaven whose naked form austere | J |
Yet genial glows with sunshine warm and clear | J |
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I hope I feel that I can yet break free | J |
From this accursed cage wherein I pine | F2 |
There comes a vision of the sounding sea | J |
The all sustaining all intombing brine | F2 |
Through want and peril wretchedness and glee | J |
Wrestling with lives more coarse and strong than mine | F2 |
I yet may woo its love and dare its strife | B2 |
By self dependence earning careless life | B2 |
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And so attaining strength The crazy ship | M2 |
Frigate or bumboat slaver mission ark | N2 |
Shall surely in the first squall heel and dip | M2 |
The strong may hope to sail its voyage and mark | N2 |
What of the ends means issues of its trip | M2 |
Knows holy vessel or Brazilian barque | N2 |
Through storm and calm it does its best to float | J2 |
For what He knows who steers and rules the boat | J2 |
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So much more strength so much more life I say | J2 |
So much more love and thought more soul and sense I | H |
We pare our members bit by bit away | J2 |
Because they're damning us with foul offence | J2 |
Cowards be strong and force them to obey | J2 |
Is virtue but a eunuch's continence | J2 |
Napoleon ev'n seems nobler than such saint | J2 |
As eighteen centuries have learned to paint | J2 |
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Thus Hope is born pale birth of grim Despair | J |
Whether the Father Shall his child devour | J |
Or this poor Babe maturing strong and fair | J |
Shall dispossess the parent of his power | J |
I know not yet I think that I could dare | J |
A death stern struggle with the fiercest hour | J |
Would foolish Wisdom's whirls of dreary thought | J2 |
But leave my doubt vexed spirit undistraught | J2 |
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Meanwhile then let me wait and hope and learn | I2 |
To curb with galling steel and ruthless hand | J2 |
These strong and passionate impulses that burn | I2 |
To sweep me from my post of self command | J2 |
Into the battle raging thick and stern | I2 |
Into the desert's freedom vast and grand | J2 |
That horseman proves full strength firm skill indeed | J2 |
Who holdeth statue calm his savage steed | J2 |
James Thomson
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