Not Everyone Wants To See You Thrive. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABBC DEFG HHHIJI KLHHMM KKKKKK NNNN| In the quietest part of the night | A |
| When you hover between dark and light | A |
| Wondering if you can float away on dreams | B |
| Hoping they won't turn into screams | B |
| What seemed as a goal has been spiralling downstream | C |
| - | |
| Into the ever green the So called | D |
| world of milk and honey | E |
| Just when you stay flout into the simmer of dusk and dawn | F |
| Wondering if your own dreams will keep you live if life won't be telling you no lie | G |
| - | |
| So I've been told you are useless | H |
| Shifting my mind to truculence | H |
| Which has brainwashed my heart to be truceless | H |
| My mentality became that of a failure | I |
| Was made to believe I can't make it | J |
| My dreams were now a horror | I |
| - | |
| Those meant to encourage you | K |
| Are the ones holding a grudge | L |
| Instead of supporting your dreams | H |
| They block all of your streams | H |
| Glancing at every chance of you falling | M |
| Because they have been waiting for you to come crawling | M |
| - | |
| It is true people can make you or break you | K |
| Standing by the sides pretending to praise you | K |
| In their hearts they've already erased you | K |
| Simply because they can't stand your breakthrough | K |
| This probably is their worst stay through | K |
| Wishing they could just drive thru | K |
| - | |
| Those meant to stay they'll stay | N |
| Never cry on those who runaway | N |
| For those who mean harm shall surely pay | N |
| Just don't act like a prey | N |
James Ntivane
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Poet's note: I wrote this poem seeing the pains and discouragements people experience at the hands of other people
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