Can I Say No, Thunder?! Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFFGHIJKI AHLFMNOPJFQJ RSJTUVFIIWX TYZWEA2WB2C2D2E2Y TTF2A2A2C2G2H2IB2A2I 2J2 W

Here I layA
prostrateB
in midst of darknessC
sandwichedD
in windy breezeE
lighteningF
glitteringF
in distanceG
sign of rainH
will there be thunderI
will he comeJ
in that thunderous thunderboltK
how do I say no thunderI
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you weren't seen yesterdayA
in the rainH
lightening flash you sentL
messenger of your comingF
scale in handM
guilty lined upN
scaredO
conscience in sin in guiltP
arraigned in your magisteriumJ
await your comingF
adjournment I seekQ
how can I say don't comeJ
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I saw you in JohnR
preached loveS
a prodigal I amJ
unworthyT
sulliedU
to soil your communionV
dreadingF
your laughterI
thunderI
no don't strikeW
father forgive me for I have sinnedX
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I soured my country's treasuryT
contracts padded to JerichoY
ballot fed with bloodied rosesZ
no don't strikeW
married to centuriesE
of side chicksA2
no don't strikeW
cocotte in th avenueB2
don't strike stillC2
freebooter engraved on foreheadD2
choleric stampedE2
no no I say noY
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o mountains fall on meT
o hills cover meT
don't let your thunder boilF2
tarry till tomorrow tarriesA2
when sunshine feedsA2
on breakfast tillC2
absolution invokedG2
go and sin no moreH2
palms togetherI
angelic steps to the pewB2
five chaplets to the heavensA2
atonement soughtI2
thunder thawedJ2
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EnuguW

Ifeanyichukwu Onwughalu
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/23/2020

Poet's note: We are all sinful, individually and collectively. Sin permeates every facet of our private and national lives. We will face judgement someday. However, there are chances of atonement we are presented. Else, thunder will strike.




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