Drives on the wheels of passion
Strives for a love portion
Always ready for what comes may
Taken away, he's gone sway
Defends but not a defender
Attacks but never an attacker
He's not even a footballer
His assist is needed by the player
He has the lyrics
More of that!!! echoes the skipper
He touches the keeper
But his critics
Make or mar the team
The Twelfth Man
Gilbert Sordebabari
Poet's note: The poem 'The Twelfth Man' by Gilbert Sordebabari seems to explore the role of a supportive and dedicated individual within a team or relationship. Here's a brief literary analysis:
Passion and Dedication: The first stanza describes the subject as someone driven by passion and always ready to support or assist in matters of love or perhaps in a broader sense, life. This person appears to be emotionally involved and dedicated.
Paradoxical Role: The second stanza introduces a paradoxical nature in the subject's role. They defend but are not a defender, attack but are not an attacker, and they are not even a footballer. This ambiguity suggests that the subject might not have a conventional role but plays a vital, if not obvious, part in the team or relationship.
Lyricism and Criticism: The third stanza highlights the subject's ability to provide lyrics, possibly representing emotional or moral support. The skipper (captain or leader) values this support, and they also touch the "keeper," which might symbolize the preservation of something important. However, the stanza hints at criticism faced by the subject.
Critical Influence: The final stanza underscores the significant influence of this 'Twelfth Man' on the team or relationship. Their actions can "make or mar the team." This suggests that while their support and contributions are crucial, they can also have a negative impact if criticized or misunderstood.
Overall, the poem appears to celebrate the often unsung heroes who provide essential support, emotionally or otherwise, in various aspects of life. It reflects on the complexity of their role and the potential consequences of criticism.
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Poem topics: away, never, passion, ready, portion, love, I love you, Print This Poem , Rhyme Scheme
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