The Diary Of An Old Soul. - October. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
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REMEMBER Lord thou hast not made me good | B |
Or if thou didst it was so long ago | C |
I have forgotten and never understood | B |
I humbly think At best it was a crude | D |
A rough hewn goodness that did need this woe | C |
This sin these harms of all kinds fierce and rude | D |
To shape it out making it live and grow | C |
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But thou art making me I thank thee sire | E |
What thou hast done and doest thou know'st well | F |
And I will help thee gently in thy fire | E |
I will lie burning on thy potter's wheel | G |
I will whirl patient though my brain should reel | G |
Thy grace shall be enough the grief to quell | F |
And growing strength perfect through weakness dire | H |
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I have not knowledge wisdom insight thought | I |
Nor understanding fit to justify | J |
Thee in thy work O Perfect Thou hast brought | I |
Me up to this and lo what thou hast wrought | I |
I cannot call it good But I can cry | J |
O enemy the maker hath not done | K |
One day thou shalt behold and from the sight wilt run | K |
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The faith I will aside is easily bent | L |
But of thy love my God one glimpse alone | M |
Can make me absolutely confident | N |
With faith hope joy in love responsive blent | N |
My soul then in the vision mighty grown | M |
Its father and its fate securely known | M |
Falls on thy bosom with exultant moan | M |
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Thou workest perfectly And if it seem | O |
Some things are not so well 'tis but because | P |
They are too loving deep too lofty wise | Q |
For me poor child to understand their laws | P |
My highest wisdom half is but a dream | O |
My love runs helpless like a falling stream | O |
Thy good embraces ill and lo its illness dies | Q |
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From sleep I wake and wake to think of thee | R |
But wherefore not with sudden glorious glee | R |
Why burst not gracious on me heaven and earth | S |
In all the splendour of a new day birth | S |
Why hangs a cloud betwixt my lord and me | R |
The moment that my eyes the morning greet | N |
My soul should panting rush to clasp thy father feet | N |
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Is it because it is not thou I see | R |
But only my poor blotted fancy of thee | R |
Oh never till thyself reveal thy face | T |
Shall I be flooded with life's vital grace | T |
Oh make my mirror heart thy shining place | T |
And then my soul awaking with the morn | U |
Shall be a waking joy eternally new born | U |
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Lord in my silver is much metal base | T |
Else should my being by this time have shown | M |
Thee thy own self therein Therefore do I | J |
Wake in the furnace I know thou sittest by | J |
Refining look keep looking in to try | J |
Thy silver master look and see thy face | T |
Else here I lie for ever blank as any stone | M |
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But when in the dim silver thou dost look | V |
I do behold thy face though blurred and faint | N |
Oh joy no flaw in me thy grace will brook | V |
But still refine slow shall the silver pass | W |
From bright to brighter till sans spot or taint | N |
Love well content shall see no speck of brass | W |
And I his perfect face shall hold as in a glass | W |
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With every morn my life afresh must break | X |
The crust of self gathered about me fresh | Y |
That thy wind spirit may rush in and shake | X |
The darkness out of me and rend the mesh | Y |
The spider devils spin out of the flesh | Y |
Eager to net the soul before it wake | X |
That it may slumberous lie and listen to the snake | X |
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'Tis that I am not good that is enough | Z |
I pry no farther that is not the way | A2 |
Here O my potter is thy making stuff | Z |
Set thy wheel going let it whir and play | A2 |
The chips in me the stones the straws the sand | N |
Cast them out with fine separating hand | N |
And make a vessel of thy yielding clay | A2 |
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What if it take a thousand years to make me | R |
So me he leave not angry on the floor | B2 |
Nay thou art never angry that would break me | R |
Would I tried never thy dear patience sore | B2 |
But were as good as thou couldst well expect me | R |
Whilst thou dost make I mar and thou correct me | R |
Then were I now content waiting for something more | B2 |
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Only my God see thou that I content thee | R |
Oh take thy own content upon me God | N |
Ah never never sure wilt thou repent thee | R |
That thou hast called thy Adam from the clod | N |
Yet must I mourn that thou shouldst ever find me | R |
One moment sluggish needing more of the rod | N |
Than thou didst think when thy desire designed me | R |
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My God it troubles me I am not better | E |
More help I pray still more Thy perfect debtor | E |
I shall be when thy perfect child I am grown | M |
My Father help me am I not thine own | M |
Lo other lords have had dominion o'er me | R |
But now thy will alone I set before me | R |
Thy own heart's life Lord thou wilt not abhor me | R |
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In youth when once again I had set out | N |
To find thee Lord my life my liberty | R |
A window now and then clouds all about | N |
Would open into heaven my heart forlorn | U |
First all would tremble with a solemn glee | R |
Then whelmed in peace rest like a man outworn | U |
That sees the dawn slow part the closed lids of the morn | U |
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Now I grow old and the soft gathered years | C2 |
Have calmed yea dulled the heart's swift fluttering beat | N |
But a quiet hope that keeps its household seat | N |
Is better than recurrent glories fleet | N |
To know thee Lord is worth a many tears | D2 |
And when this mildew age has dried away | A2 |
My heart will beat again as young and strong and gay | A2 |
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Stronger and gayer tenfold but O friends | E2 |
Not for itself nor any hoarded bliss | F2 |
I see but vaguely whither my being tends | E2 |
All vaguely spy a glory shadow blent | N |
Vaguely desire the individual kiss | F2 |
But when I think of God a large content | N |
Fills the dull air of my gray cloudy tent | N |
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Father of me thou art my bliss secure | G2 |
Make of me maker whatsoe'er thou wilt | N |
Let fancy's wings hang moulting hope grow poor | H2 |
And doubt steam up from where a joy was spilt | N |
I lose no time to reason it plain and clear | I2 |
But fly to thee my life's perfection dear | I2 |
Not what I think but what thou art makes sure | G2 |
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This utterance of spirit through still thought | N |
This forming of heart stuff in moulds of brain | U |
Is helpful to the soul by which 'tis wrought | N |
The shape reacting on the heart again | U |
But when I am quite old and words are slow | C |
Like dying things that keep their holes for woe | C |
And memory's withering tendrils clasp with effort vain | U |
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Thou then as now no less wilt be my life | J2 |
And I shall know it better than before | B2 |
Praying and trusting hoping claiming more | B2 |
From effort vain sick foil and bootless strife | J2 |
I shall with childness fresh look up to thee | R |
Thou seeing thy child with age encumbered sore | B2 |
Wilt round him bend thine arm more carefully | R |
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And when grim Death doth take me by the throat | N |
Thou wilt have pity on thy handiwork | K2 |
Thou wilt not let him on my suffering gloat | N |
But draw my soul out gladder than man or boy | L2 |
When thy saved creatures from the narrow ark | M2 |
Rushed out and leaped and laughed and cried for joy | L2 |
And the great rainbow strode across the dark | M2 |
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Against my fears my doubts my ignorance | N2 |
I trust in thee O father of my Lord | N |
The world went on in this same broken dance | O2 |
When worn and mocked he trusted and adored | N |
I too will trust and gather my poor best | N |
To face the truth faced false So in his nest | N |
I shall awake at length a little scarred and scored | N |
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Things cannot look all right so long as I | J |
Am not all right who see therefore not right | N |
Can see The lamp within sends out the light | N |
Which shows the things and if its rays go wry | J |
Or are not white they must part show a lie | J |
The man half cured did men not trees conclude | N |
Because he moving saw what else had seemed a wood | N |
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Give me take from me as thou wilt I learn | U |
Slowly and stubbornly I learn to yield | N |
With a strange hopefulness As from the field | N |
Of hard fought battle won the victor chief | P2 |
Turns thankfully although his heart do yearn | U |
So from my old things to thy new I turn | U |
With sad thee trusting heart and not in grief | P2 |
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If with my father I did wander free | R |
Floating o'er hill and field where'er we would | N |
And lighting on the sward before the door | B2 |
Strange faces through the window panes should see | R |
And strange feet standing where the loved had stood | N |
The dear old place theirs all as ours before | B2 |
Should I be sorrowful father having thee | R |
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So Lord if thou tak'st from me all the rest | N |
Thyself with each resumption drawing nigher | B2 |
It shall but hurt me as the thorn of the briar | B2 |
When I reach to the pale flower in its breast | N |
To have thee Lord is to have all thy best | N |
Holding it by its very life divine | U |
To let my friend's hand go and take his heart in mine | U |
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Take from me leisure all familiar places | Q2 |
Take all the lovely things of earth and air | B2 |
Take from me books take all my precious faces | Q2 |
Take words melodious and their songful linking | R2 |
Take scents and sounds and all thy outsides fair | B2 |
Draw nearer taking and to my sober thinking | R2 |
Thou bring'st them nearer all and ready to my prayer | B2 |
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No place on earth henceforth I shall count strange | S2 |
For every place belongeth to my Christ | N |
I will go calm where'er thou bid'st me range | S2 |
Whoe'er my neighbour thou art still my nighest | N |
Oh my heart's life my owner will of my being | R2 |
Into my soul thou every moment diest | N |
In thee my life thus evermore decreeing | R2 |
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What though things change and pass nor come again | U |
Thou the life heart of all things changest never | B2 |
The sun shines on the fair clouds turn to rain | U |
And glad the earth with many a spring and river | B2 |
The hearts that answer change with chill and shiver | B2 |
That mourn the past sad sick with hopeless pain | U |
They know not thee our changeless heart and brain | U |
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My halting words will some day turn to song | R2 |
Some far off day in holy other times | T2 |
The melody now prisoned in my rimes | T2 |
Will one day break aloft and from the throng | R2 |
Of wrestling thoughts and words spring up the air | B2 |
As from the flower its colour's sweet despair | B2 |
Issues in odour and the sky's low levels climbs | T2 |
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My surgent thought shoots lark like up to thee | R |
Thou like the heaven art all about the lark | R2 |
Whatever I surmise or know in me | R |
Idea or but symbol on the dark | R2 |
Is living working thought creating power | B2 |
In thee the timeless father of the hour | B2 |
I am thy book thy song thy child would be | R |
George Macdonald
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