Concerning Jesus Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: A BCCBBCCBDEDEFG A HIIHHIIHJBJKKB A LMMNNMMNBOBOMM P AQQAAQQAQQQQQQ P RBBRRBBRJQQEJE A SQQSSQQTUVVUUV A JQQJJQQJAWXAAX A QQQQQQQQPYPYZA2 E QQQQQQQQQB2QB2QB2 E QQQQQQQQEB2B2EQQ E EC2D2EEC2C2EWQWQEE E E2EEYYAEYQQF2F2KK E QQQQQQQQZAAZAZ A WEEWXEEXAG2G2YAY A EJJEEJJEQH2H2QQH2 A I2QQI2I2QQTJ2B2B2J2K 2K2 A AK2K2AAK2K2EL2B2M2B2 M2L2 A YB2B2YYB2B2YL2B2B2N2 L2N2| I | A |
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| If thou hadst been a sculptor what a race | B |
| Of forms divine had thenceforth filled the land | C |
| Methinks I see thee glorious workman stand | C |
| Striking a marble window through blind space | B |
| Thy face's reflex on the coming face | B |
| As dawns the stone to statue 'neath thy hand | C |
| Body obedient to its soul's command | C |
| Which is thy thought informing it with grace | B |
| So had it been But God who quickeneth clay | D |
| Nor turneth it to marble maketh eyes | E |
| Not shadowy hollows where no sunbeams play | D |
| Would mould his loftiest thought in human guise | E |
| Thou didst appear walking unknown abroad | F |
| God's living sculpture all informed of God | G |
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| II | A |
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| If one should say Lo there thy statue take | H |
| Possession sculptor now inherit it | I |
| Go forth upon the earth in likeness fit | I |
| As with a trumpet cry at morning wake | H |
| The sleeping nations with light's terror shake | H |
| The slumber from their hearts that where they sit | I |
| They leap straight up aghast as at a pit | I |
| Gaping beneath I hear him answer make | H |
| Alas for me I cannot nor would dare | J |
| Inform what I revered as I did trace | B |
| Who would be fool that he like fool might fare | J |
| With feeble spirit mocking the enorm | K |
| Strength on his forehead Thou God's thought thy form | K |
| Didst live the large significance of thy face | B |
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| III | A |
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| Men have I seen and seen with wonderment | L |
| Noble in form lift upward and divine | M |
| In whom I yet must search as in a mine | M |
| After that soul of theirs by which they went | N |
| Alive upon the earth And I have bent | N |
| Regard on many a woman who gave sign | M |
| God willed her beautiful when he drew the line | M |
| That shaped each float and fold of beauty's tent | N |
| Her soul alas chambered in pigmy space | B |
| Left the fair visage pitiful inane | O |
| Poor signal only of a coming face | B |
| When from the penetrale she filled the fane | O |
| Possessed of thee was every form of thine | M |
| Thy very hair replete with the divine | M |
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| IV | P |
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| If thou hadst built a temple how my eye | A |
| Had hungering fed thereon from low browed crypt | Q |
| Up to the soaring pinnacles that tipt | Q |
| With stars gave signal when the sun drew nigh | A |
| Dark caverns in and under vivid sky | A |
| Its home and aim Say from the glory slipt | Q |
| And down into the shadows dropt and dipt | Q |
| Or reared from darkness up so holy high | A |
| Thou build'st the temple of thy holy ghost | Q |
| From hid foundation to high hidden fate | Q |
| Foot in the grave head at the heavenly gate | Q |
| From grave and sky filled with a fighting host | Q |
| Man is thy temple man thy work elect | Q |
| His glooms and glory thine great architect | Q |
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| V | P |
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| If thou hadst been a painter what fresh looks | R |
| What outbursts of pent glories what new grace | B |
| Had shone upon us from the great world's face | B |
| How had we read as in eternal books | R |
| The love of God in loneliest shiest nooks | R |
| A lily in merest lines thy hand did trace | B |
| Had plainly been God's child of lower race | B |
| And oh how strong the hills songful the brooks | R |
| To thee all nature's meanings lie light bare | J |
| Because thy heart is nature's inner side | Q |
| Clear as to us earth on the dawn's gold tide | Q |
| Her notion vast up in thy soul did rise | E |
| Thine is the world thine all its splendours rare | J |
| Thou Man ideal with the unsleeping eyes | E |
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| VI | A |
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| But I have seen pictures the work of man | S |
| In which at first appeared but chaos wild | Q |
| So high the art transcended they beguiled | Q |
| The eye as formless and without a plan | S |
| Not soon the spirit brooding o'er began | S |
| To see a purpose rise like mountain isled | Q |
| When God said Let the Dry appear and piled | Q |
| Above the waves it rose in twilight wan | T |
| So might thy pictures then have been too strange | U |
| For us to pierce beyond their outmost look | V |
| A vapour and a darkness a sealed book | V |
| An atmosphere too high for wings to range | U |
| And so we could but gazing pale and change | U |
| And tremble as at a void thought cannot brook | V |
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| VII | A |
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| But earth is now thy living picture where | J |
| Thou shadowest truth the simple and profound | Q |
| By the same form in vital union bound | Q |
| Where one can see but the first step of thy stair | J |
| Another sees it vanish far in air | J |
| When thy king David viewed the starry round | Q |
| From heart and fingers broke the psaltery sound | Q |
| Lord what is man that thou shouldst mind his prayer | J |
| But when the child beholds the heavens on high | A |
| He babbles childish noises not less dear | W |
| Than what the king sang praying to the ear | X |
| Of him who made the child and king and sky | A |
| Earth is thy picture painter great whose eye | A |
| Sees with the child sees with the kingly seer | X |
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| VIII | A |
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| If thou hadst built some mighty instrument | Q |
| And set thee down to utter ordered sound | Q |
| Whose faithful billows from thy hands unbound | Q |
| Breaking in light against our spirits went | Q |
| And caught and bore above this earthly tent | Q |
| The far strayed back to their prime natal ground | Q |
| Where all roots fast in harmony are found | Q |
| And God sits thinking out a pure consent | Q |
| Nay that thou couldst not that was not for thee | P |
| Our broken music thou must first restore | Y |
| A harder task than think thine own out free | P |
| And till thou hast done it no divinest score | Y |
| Though rendered by thine own angelic choir | Z |
| Can lift one human spirit from the mire | A2 |
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| IX | E |
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| If thou hadst been a poet On my heart | Q |
| The thought flashed sudden burning through the weft | Q |
| Of life and with too much I sank bereft | Q |
| Up to my eyes the tears with sudden start | Q |
| Thronged blinding then the veil would rend and part | Q |
| The husk of vision would in twain be cleft | Q |
| Thy hidden soul in naked beauty left | Q |
| I should behold thee Nature as thou art | Q |
| O poet Jesus at thy holy feet | Q |
| I should have lien sainted with listening | B2 |
| My pulses answering ever in rhythmic beat | Q |
| The stroke of each triumphant melody's wing | B2 |
| Creating as it moved my being sweet | Q |
| My soul thy harp thy word the quivering string | B2 |
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| X | E |
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| Thee had we followed through the twilight land | Q |
| Where thought grows form and matter is refined | Q |
| Back into thought of the eternal mind | Q |
| Till seeing them one Lo in the morn we stand | Q |
| Then started fresh and followed hand in hand | Q |
| With sense divinely growing till combined | Q |
| We heard the music of the planets wind | Q |
| In harmony with billows on the strand | Q |
| Till one with earth and all God's utterance | E |
| We hardly knew whether the sun outspake | B2 |
| Or a glad sunshine from our spirits brake | B2 |
| Whether we think or winds and blossoms dance | E |
| Alas O poet leader for such good | Q |
| Thou wast God's tragedy writ in tears and blood | Q |
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| XI | E |
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| Hadst thou been one of these in many eyes | E |
| Too near to be a glory for thy sheen | C2 |
| Thou hadst been scorned and to the best hadst been | D2 |
| A setter forth of strange divinities | E |
| But to the few construct of harmonies | E |
| A sudden sun uplighting the serene | C2 |
| High heaven of love and through the cloudy screen | C2 |
| That 'twixt our souls and truth all wretched lies | E |
| Dawning at length hadst been a love and fear | W |
| Worshipped on high from Magian's mountain crest | Q |
| And all night long symbolled by lamp flames clear | W |
| Thy sign a star upon thy people's breast | Q |
| Where that strange arbitrary token lies | E |
| Which once did scare the sun in noontide skies | E |
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| XII | E |
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| But as thou camest forth to bring the poor | E2 |
| Whose hearts are nearer faith and verity | E |
| Spiritual childhood thy philosophy | E |
| So taught'st the A B C of heavenly lore | Y |
| Because thou sat'st not lonely evermore | Y |
| With mighty truths informing language high | A |
| But walking in thy poem continually | E |
| Didst utter deeds of all true forms the core | Y |
| Poet and poem one indivisible fact | Q |
| Because thou didst thine own ideal act | Q |
| And so for parchment on the human soul | F2 |
| Didst write thine aspirations at thy goal | F2 |
| Thou didst arrive with curses for acclaim | K |
| And cry to God up through a cloud of shame | K |
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| XIII | E |
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| For three and thirty years a living seed | Q |
| A lonely germ dropt on our waste world's side | Q |
| Thy death and rising thou didst calmly bide | Q |
| Sore companied by many a clinging weed | Q |
| Sprung from the fallow soil of evil and need | Q |
| Hither and thither tossed by friends denied | Q |
| Pitied of goodness dull and scorned of pride | Q |
| Until at length was done the awful deed | Q |
| And thou didst lie outworn in stony bower | Z |
| Three days asleep oh slumber godlike brief | A |
| For man of sorrows and acquaint with grief | A |
| Life seed thou diedst that Death might lose his power | Z |
| And thou with rooted stem and shadowy leaf | A |
| Rise of humanity the crimson flower | Z |
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| XIV | A |
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| Where dim the ethereal eye no art though clear | W |
| As golden star in morning's amber springs | E |
| Can pierce the fogs of low imaginings | E |
| Painting and sculpture are a mockery mere | W |
| Where dull to deafness is the hearing ear | X |
| Vain is the poet Nought but earthly things | E |
| Have credence When the soaring skylark sings | E |
| How shall the stony statue strain to hear | X |
| Open the deaf ear wake the sleeping eye | A |
| And Lo musicians painters poets all | G2 |
| Trooping instinctive come without a call | G2 |
| As winds that where they list blow evermore | Y |
| As waves from silent deserts roll to die | A |
| In mighty voices on the peopled shore | Y |
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| XV | A |
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| Our ears thou openedst mad'st our eyes to see | E |
| All they who work in stone or colour fair | J |
| Or build up temples of the quarried air | J |
| Which we call music scholars are of thee | E |
| Henceforth in might of such the earth shall be | E |
| Truth's temple theatre where she shall wear | J |
| All forms of revelation all men bear | J |
| Tapers in acolyte humility | E |
| O master maker thy exultant art | Q |
| Goes forth in making makers Pictures No | H2 |
| But painters who in love and truth shall show | H2 |
| Glad secrets from thy God's rejoicing heart | Q |
| Sudden green grass and waving corn up start | Q |
| When through dead sands thy living waters go | H2 |
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| XVI | A |
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| From the beginning good and fair are one | I2 |
| But men the beauty from the truth will part | Q |
| And though the truth is ever beauty's heart | Q |
| After the beauty will short breathed run | I2 |
| And the indwelling truth deny and shun | I2 |
| Therefore in cottage synagogue and mart | Q |
| Thy thoughts came forth in common speech not art | Q |
| With voice and eye in Jewish Babylon | T |
| Thou taughtest not with pen or carved stone | J2 |
| Nor in thy hand the trembling wires didst take | B2 |
| Thou of the truth not less than all wouldst make | B2 |
| For Truth's sake even her forms thou didst disown | J2 |
| Ere through the love of beauty truth shall fail | K2 |
| The light behind shall burn the broidered veil | K2 |
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| XVII | A |
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| Holy of holies my bare feet draw nigh | A |
| Jesus thy body is the shining veil | K2 |
| By which I look on God nor grow death pale | K2 |
| I know that in my verses poor may lie | A |
| Things low for see the thinker is not high | A |
| But were my song as loud as saints' all hail | K2 |
| As pure as prophet's cry of warning wail | K2 |
| As holy as thy mother's ecstasy | E |
| He sings a better who for love or ruth | L2 |
| Into his heart a little child doth take | B2 |
| Nor thoughts nor feelings art nor wisdom seal | M2 |
| The man who at thy table bread shall break | B2 |
| Thy praise was not that thou didst know or feel | M2 |
| Or show or love but that thou didst the truth | L2 |
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| XVIII | A |
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| Despised Rejected by the priest led roar | Y |
| Of the multitude The imperial purple flung | B2 |
| About the form the hissing scourge had stung | B2 |
| Witnessing naked to the truth it bore | Y |
| True son of father true I thee adore | Y |
| Even the mocking purple truthful hung | B2 |
| On thy true shoulders bleeding its folds among | B2 |
| For thou wast king art king for evermore | Y |
| I know the Father he knows me the truth | L2 |
| Truth witness therefore the one essential king | B2 |
| With thee I die with thee live worshipping | B2 |
| O human God O brother eldest born | N2 |
| Never but thee was there a man in sooth | L2 |
| Never a true crown but thy crown of thorn | N2 |
George Macdonald
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