As You Leave Me Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FGHI FJKLJMN OPQFFRSBFTU VShiny record albums scattered over | A |
the living room floor reflecting light | B |
from the lamp sharp reflections that hurt | C |
my eyes as I watch you squatting among the platters | D |
the beer foam making mustaches on your lips | E |
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And too | F |
the shadows on your cheeks from your long lashes | G |
fascinate me almost as much as the dimples | H |
in your cheeks your arms and your legs | I |
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You | F |
hum along with Mathis how you love Mathis | J |
with his burnished hair and quicksilver voice that dances | K |
among the stars and whirls through canyons | L |
like windblown snow sometimes I think that Mathis | J |
could take you from me if you could be complete | M |
without me I glance at my watch It is now time | N |
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You rise | O |
silently and to the bedroom and the paint | P |
on the lips red on the eyes black | Q |
and I lean in the doorway and smoke and see you | F |
grow old before my eyes and smoke why do you | F |
chatter while you dress and smile when you grab | R |
your large leather purse don't you know that when you leave me | S |
I walk to the window and watch you and light | B |
a reefer as I watch you and I die as I watch you | F |
disappear in the dark streets | T |
to whistle and smile at the johns | U |
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Submitted by Hen | V |
Etheridge Knight
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